Reviews for Unintended
Guest chapter 1 . 4/27
2 years later...

People who read the original can't even reread the unre-edited version and they are pissed.
Curious people coming across the summary can't read any part of the story and wished you'd kept the original version so they could at least get a feel for that especially since it's well past 7/4/14.
Guest chapter 13 . 7/27/2015
is there going to be any update?
Guest chapter 13 . 6/13/2014
Guest chapter 13 . 5/17/2014
Where is the new update!?
Guest chapter 1 . 4/1/2014
Where is chapter 14?
Update please
Arihera chapter 13 . 3/9/2014
Intense and great I enjoyed the complexity of the relationship even when the characters were a bit insane
Guest chapter 13 . 3/8/2014
I find this story last night.
Good one, update soon
Guest chapter 13 . 2/25/2014
wow please please update again soon
Guest chapter 13 . 2/22/2014
Finally the said i love u
Give me the next chap now
Guest chapter 13 . 2/22/2014
Next chapter soonerrrr , update soon nn
twiluvergaga chapter 13 . 2/21/2014
I love this chapter update soon
Guest chapter 13 . 2/20/2014
Update soon
Guest chapter 13 . 2/20/2014
U updateeeee... Yessssss they kissed and now y should update soon to see what will happen nextttt
Urban Rose chapter 13 . 2/21/2014
Literally read this straight through cos I was so in edge to find out what was going to happen next! At last they confess they love eachother! I like what you've done with ur artistic licence and not worried people may look at it from a different pov... Ie step-father, ten years older, not yet 18... But instead or how u viewed it as a guy who's older that's fallen for a younger biological and very mature girl, that he wouldn't have had the opportunity to know otherwise realistic other than teachers when do we mix with much older guys that actually get to know us and I mean properly try to get to know you on the level that jake and Bella do well maybe as best friends much older brother but again... That still kinda may not work- so what I'm trying to say is it shouldn't work cos we should be abit ewww this is creepy but the way you protray it it really isn't! Plus it helps it's jake :) it's beautifully written like all of your stories and absolutely captivating! So well done and keep it up chick :) Love urban rose xxx ps I hope this all came out as it was supposed to and not in a bad way cos I love it! Truly I do I was just replying to ur a/n's from near beginning!
corkykellems chapter 13 . 2/21/2014
Oh I have a feeling all Hell is going to break loose...hope they can handle it...Great Chapter...Thanks
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