|Reviews for Chosen|
| anbeedomo chapter 17 . 10/8/2013
never reviewed any of your stories before (they are AMAZING by the way) but my god the last part! made me go all gooey and wkswosndorjri you go cato! fight for your love!
keep up the amazing writing and I can't wait to see what else devious plots Snow has for poor little Peeta
| langkuoch chapter 15 . 10/4/2013
First of all, I think that this chapter was beautifully written (like the rest have been) and I'm inexplicably glad that you included that Cato and Peeta spent their last night together engaging in activities other than sex. It was refreshing from a lot of the other pre-arena fornicating I've read before and I'm sure I'm not the only one who melts every time Cato shows his soft and caring side (which is pleasantly often in this fanfiction). I've always appreciated the relationship that you created with Peeta and Cato and their deep, fervent love that slowly grew between the two.
and the protectiveness from Cato is so fucking hot tho omg can I have a boyfriend like him pls i'm waiting?
Anyway, I really liked the idea of the new story you were thinking of writing! I'm all for it and I would love to see it being made (I'm also running low on new Cato-Peeta fictions to read as well and this would be perfect, haha) :D
Keep being wonderful,
| JacksonTheGreat chapter 16 . 10/6/2013
I beg to differ, I find love triangles enticing and this one is going to be interesting. I loooove the direction in which you take this story, I can never predict whats going to happen next. Update soon ! :)
| LPD chapter 15 . 10/4/2013
I love this chapter! And I really like the new idea for another story!
| MangoMagic17 chapter 16 . 10/6/2013
Oh thalassa you're such a bitch. I absolutely hate her. Hope she dies soon because I was hoping Cato would kill her. This chapter was simply like a roller coaster, the memories of Peeta were small yet detailed makes Cato seem the more human. I think this is one of my favourite things about your writing is that you pay great attention to little details that makes a huge difference in the quality if writing. My favourite part of this chapter was when Cato remembers Peeta's blush and laugh closely followed by Cato threatening Thalassa. The whole Katniss thing will be interesting too...Cato's reaction against the deaths was very humanize and I am sad that Cato will lose his best friend. Marvel actually seemed nice and Glimmer is clueless as always. Peeta has had a huge impact on Cato which shows considering how humanize Cato is now. I actually feel very broken hearted when I read Peeta's part, he's now all alone and vulnerable. I honestly don't know how he is going to keep it together. I'm not surprised if he ends up like Annie for a bit. I really do hope Peeta doesn't struggle too much. Keep up the amazing work as always and hope there's more soon :D
| RonaldGarcia91 chapter 16 . 10/5/2013
OHHHH MYYY GOD! Mr. fucking Woods... I WAS LIKE WTFFF MANNNN HELL NOOO! he is fucking disgusting oh god i was so mad he kissed Peeta and Peeta reacted exactly how he wanted... Peeta will definetly go crazy if he has to play along with that sadistic bastard and Cato is in there not knowing anything that is happening to Peeta D: and Cato Himself dont have it easy either e.e he has to kill everyone including Clove and Katniss if he wants to survive!, this is getting really interesting!
Thalassa need to die in the most horrible tbh how dare she calls Petta like that¿? THAT BITCH lol !
Amazing chapter as always
| Kit Of Yaoi chapter 16 . 10/5/2013
*dang head on wall* stupid snow
| RonaldGarcia91 chapter 15 . 10/4/2013
WOAO great chapter, i laugh at some parts cause of peetas cluelessness, It was so cute you just wanted to hug him lol! if that makes any sence!, and Cato always worried about him made it even better, that litle flashback you put about Catos Dicovering his sexualityit was a great add to the story it made me feel like he really cared about what he is doing now and how he change from fucking anyone and didnt care to learn how to love from scratch! as i said before im sure you have a twist before the game starts and i cant wait to read it i dont know but my mind is set that Snow will pulll a Bitch on them and will send Peeta to teh Games along with Cato! Just to make them Suffer and getting the 12 boy to go crazy !
For the new story.. it looks interesting! i will read it if you do it and im Clove Friends with Benefits never ends in a good way!
| NEWBIE1213 chapter 15 . 10/4/2013
I personally think that would be an amazing story and I would definitely love to read it: )
| JacksonTheGreat chapter 15 . 10/4/2013
Perfect chapter, Peeta's innocence is adorable. Also, the promo for the new story looks good, I definitely think you should go ahead with it :)
| MangoMagic17 chapter 15 . 10/3/2013
This chapter was amazing...simply amazing...you said to feel free vomit and I'm telling that speech made me fly to heaven and back...you're like one of those tv writers for romantic drama...like seriously it was really rally good...never mind the quality of writing which flows effortlessly...but the little details of this chapter is what makes it so perfect. Peeta's innocence was so endearing and Cato's transition from this brute to someone that is pretty much Prince Charming is great to read (although I would love to read Cato being all dominant in bed ;) this chapter wasn't some smutty sex scene (I won't complain in the future if you would make some) this chapter was simply breathtaking. I am worried about what will happen in future chapters now considering Cato will be going into the arena soon but I hope they can find their way to each other...even if it meant Cloves death :( as for that new fanfic, it sounds intriguing that's for sure but just like with any Peeta / Cato fanfic, I won't know if I'll love it or like it or it's "meh" before I read it. My first impression is, Peeta as friends with benefits doesn't really portray the innocence that you portrayed here. Maybe it's a different perspective on his character? All in all I would rather you finished this fanfic first before venturing on new fanfics using your great ideas that you always have. But hey that's only my opinion :) keep up the amazing work you're doing and hope there's more soon :D
| ABunchOfStuff chapter 15 . 10/3/2013
Oh ma gosh! I've been so behind forever because I've had no Internet, but there isn't anything like spending 2 hours devoting yourself to reading this story so much you can recite it by memory. I just want to keep reading it forever and ever! And by the way, I think the sex scene was great! I think it was very well done, and not to smutty either. Thanks so much for putting up with my long, boring reviews! Hope to see another chapter up soon! :D
| RonaldGarcia91 chapter 14 . 10/3/2013
Oh God i was finding so hard not to Review every single chapter cause it was gonna be so Spaming that i decided that i was gonna Review when i got to the final chapter you get so far i didnt wanted to bother you with Reviews and reviews of the same person...
Let me tell you something you have a great story in here i read it all in less than 5 days and i was so amaze by the cliffhangers you put in there i Gasp, and had a lot of crazy feelings cause all the stuff that Peeta has gone through and when he has those meltdowns i almost find myself crying , the emotions you manage to caught are so deep and it amazed me every single time... The parts i love and that had me must crazy about were when Peeta saw that Aunt Mya was their Avox , i was expecting his mom to show in any chapter (and i still do) but Putting Mya there was so unnexpected and i have to Bow to you for that also in the last chapters when she says to them that Peeta has to loose his Virginity , i was thinking like Cato (How in hell is he going to do it if Petta goes panic/Crazy everytime) and also I want Katniss Dead she Betrayed Peeta im mad at her (You are supposed to be his friend, BITCH) and Gale put the love card on the interviews as well, im pretty sure the next chapters will go on who will be the most powerfull couple on the Capitol, and the games are about to start and for the looks of it Petta will be a Virgin no more and then is he going to be alone at sight of Mya and Snow¿? OH God there is a lot than can happen in this story that i go crazy just thinking about it...
I never really though i would find a Cato/Petta pairing so great but you did it! and FYI i read that you read TMI as well have you finished the books¿? which one is your favorite, I myself love COA is my favorite of the Saga so far... tho i love Sizzy i have to say i would love to see you do a Pairing in there with Simon and Raphael, even Jace!
I hope you undestand me.. my first lenguaje is not english and i think this review is all over the place but its just how i feel RN ... Sorry ,
| mum2shane chapter 13 . 10/1/2013
like this story in its dark & twisted way...also like it as its not something iv read b4
| JacksonTheGreat chapter 14 . 9/29/2013
Ooo this just gets more interesting by the chapter! Update soon! :)