|Reviews for The Contract|
| sophgoph chapter 1 . 12/17/2017
Her Dowry was porn. That is so perfect.
| stuckunderwater chapter 1 . 7/17/2017
This is hilarious
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/27/2016
Lol, one of my favourite parts!
"Well, that's it, Zuko. When you're old enough, you'll marry Mai and start a family together."
"That's really weird, Mom."
| Ginny A Heron chapter 1 . 9/27/2016
This is actually brilliant!
I love this fic so much! It's both hilarious and yet completely feasible, such a joy to read!
You wrote this so well! And the Maiko was very in-character and amazing!
I loved every sentence, and every segment of this had me smiling, from Mai's mum at the beginning, to Princess Ursa's first conversation with Mai about knives, to the Lady Rei comics (I can't even, that was the best thing), to the contract changing to Azula, to Ty Lee, to Mai's sarcastic comments, to Zuko letting her make her own choice (love the whole multiple breakup thing, even though it is technically canon, I can see it in the future as a definite head-canon) and everything in-between.
Thanks for this story! :)
- Ginevra Annabeth Herondale (sorry I'm too lazy to sign in)
| maripaz6 chapter 1 . 8/3/2016
This was hilarious! Ozai changing the betrothal contract just so he could keep his comics made me laugh SO MUCH. Totally unexpected. And then Ty Lee's reaction *giggles* I am happy that Mai and Zuko got together in the end :) And when Ursa was chitchatting with Mai as a child (and Mai described "killing") her dolls...so funny.
Thanks for the marvelous story!
| Data Seeker chapter 1 . 1/7/2016
Your basic fic is silly, but in a good way.
Your characterization of Zuko, Mia, their parents and others were pretty too.
Some of the details and story structure need work.
The wholesome standards are high.
The language is clean.
Nothing is suggestively offensive- and you handled certain references very well. THANK YOU.
No extreme violence or any other vile content.
I hope this review brightens your day. God bless
| DarkKing009 chapter 1 . 5/11/2015
| AnnabethLuna chapter 1 . 4/8/2015
This is actually hilarious. So many twists and so much delightful sarcasm. My life is better for reading it.
| Animekitty47 chapter 1 . 5/8/2014
Awesome parody. Such a good parody, that it almost could have happened that way. Almost. XD
| Writingathing chapter 1 . 9/22/2013
Best closing sentence ever. Sums up their relationship perfectly.
| Whitetree-Nimloth chapter 1 . 7/29/2013
This is hilarious, and the end really sweet. I loved it.
| Fireborn101 chapter 1 . 7/18/2013
This was great XD
| Kimberly T chapter 1 . 7/16/2013
Oh. My. Gawd.
I now have this image of a marriage negotiator (or whatever the term was for someone who primarily oversaw the creation of marriage contracts and all the traditions associated with them) reading the royal family's message about what they wanted included in the contract, setting the paper down carefully on the desk, and then grabbing and chugging strong sake straight out of the bottle.
/"Are you happy?"
"Did your mother tell you say 'yes' to all my questions?"
"Do you hate my son?"
"Y- no fair."
Ursa chuckled. "Sorry, easy target."/
You write the Best. Ursa. Ever. So many fics have her being The Madonna, so perfect and saintly that she probably doesn't even sweat (unless the plot demands sweating), but in this one, she's utterly human!
| Private Fire chapter 1 . 7/13/2013
I AM SMILING LIKE AN IDIOT!
I absolutely L-O-V-E this story. The characters are well done. The storyline itself and the humor! Oh the humor! I love the addition of Lady Rei. I love how you poke fun at the comics. Zuko and Mai are perfect in this. I love how you handled Ursa. How beautiful!
I will tune down my gushing now to say that this is your best story ever! I love Retroactive and your Maiko stories, but this one is the best for the humor and the Maiko arc.
| Julia451 chapter 1 . 7/12/2013
The 3 funniest parts were the cute little exchange between Mai and Ursa in the third section, and: "Child, say that you'd like to marry Prince Zuko."
"That I'd like to marry Prince Zuko?"
And: "Indeed, tea this good couldn't be found anywhere else. Surely it was worth it."
I really like the idea of Mai's snobby mother looking down on Ursa for her peasant heritage. The line "She stomped up the stairs to her room, and resolved to spend the rest of the day testing to see which would wear out first, her knives or the woodwork on her bedroom walls" is really gret, too.
The ending section is just wonderful! Every word there, perfect! I truly just love it! Good story, EXCELLENT last section!