|Reviews for One Twilight Hill|
| Guest chapter 4 . 8/2/2013
Please update soon !
| Guest chapter 4 . 8/1/2013
I think this is a really good story, I have enjoyed it so far...Please update soon.
| dawnmac chapter 3 . 7/13/2013
Interesting concept. I was a bit confused with Jake, Nessie with Jessica and Mike BUT I realized you switched the timeline a bit and Jessica/Mike were on there second go round. The only suggestion i have is tone down the Brooke bashing. The problem with doing a crossover with an iconic show like OTH is most people have there favorites and as someone who grew up with show, Brooke was mine (as she was with many). You are making her a twirl the mustache type of villain and it doesn't fit. Obviously, your partner is a huge Lucas/Peyton fan and I get that as I prefer them together, but you don't have to make Brooke evil and Peyton a saint. Peyton had a lot of grey areas in the show and Brooke was a good friend towards her so this version pisses me off. Maybe, you have plans in that area and I am jumping to conclusions to soon... I will give you the benefit of the doubt. I don't know have a Wolfe imprint on her or something rich girl falls for poor Native American who also turns into a Wolfe, works for me. LOL
Love Haley and Nate no complaints there. The rest of the characters are spot on and I see Bevin and Alice as fast friends. LOL.
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/11/2013
I like this. Crossovers can be really good when done right and you both have.
Do not worry about review just keep going ;-)
| PrincessRedfern chapter 2 . 7/11/2013
Love the idea and I'm really interested to see how it develops. I'm just a little confused as to when it's set. Because you've mentioned Nessie, Jake, Erin and Seth, but you also mentioned Jessica and Mike. Aside from that its awesome :D