Reviews for Run
Guest chapter 1 . 2/1
The best one-shot I have had the pleasure to read through. I almost don't believe that this is a "porn with little plot", Because I defintely see a great plot here. Great job. This was amazing. The hours I spent on reading this was well-spent in my eyes.
ViennPeridot chapter 1 . 9/4/2014
"I had thought you two would wait until you were in the well" Translation: ABOUT SLAGGING TIME YOU TWO HOOKED UP!
I nearly died laughing. That was a perfect Prime-ism XD

The big plushie kitty bit was adorable. Maybe Ravage figures if it keeps Mezzo from throttling him again, it's all to the good XD
dragonqueen909 chapter 1 . 8/13/2014
awww! i love this story XD so full of love and affection .
DixieChicrules123 chapter 1 . 4/23/2014
great... long one-shot
Storylady35 chapter 1 . 4/9/2014
You know for a so called 'P-W-V-L-P' with 'no redeeming qualities', this story is in dept, driven, detailed, exciting, cute, loving, interesting and beautiful. Yes it is mostly a Porn but to say it has "very little plot" in an insult to this story. It may be one shot, it may be short but has a very driven and wonderful plot. I enjoyed every second of it and hope you write more like it.
Riyappe Paws chapter 1 . 3/25/2014
Lol. This story... I love this story. I've read it three times. It just doesn't get old.
Flaming Skulls chapter 1 . 2/5/2014
I just absolutely loved this x3 it was really good and you should do more in the future.
Demon Of Dark NOBLE chapter 1 . 12/19/2013
Aw Ravage getting pounced on by a sparkling so cute.
Dawn Racer chapter 1 . 11/27/2013
OMP fragging amazing!
yamiishot chapter 1 . 9/30/2013
Ooooh my I love the headcannons for the different cycles X3 perfect!
LunaticV chapter 1 . 9/1/2013
this is so lovely :D
What about the Praxian courting dance? i mean, i'm sure Jazz would wanna do things the right way for Prowl and at least do some sort of courting?
will you be writing about the other bots?
LunarNightDreamer chapter 1 . 8/12/2013
love it so much
Crazygrrl XD chapter 1 . 8/2/2013
Holy PRIMUS, this was the best one-shot I've ever read! Seriously though, it was amazing! And I love your idea of the other reproductive cycles, I really hope you write some of those too! Your writing in this was great, and I'm glad it became more than smut because the sparkling was, quite frankly, adorable. (Whenever he said 'kitty' it reminded me of Monsters inc. and Boo) I loved the way you wrote each of the characters, especially Prowl, the adorable little thing! Good job on the fic, in was great! :D
IvoryCrawler chapter 1 . 8/1/2013
This is probably one of the sweetest ones i've read so far! Yay for happy endings!
CheshireMaddie chapter 1 . 7/15/2013
I adore this, excellent work
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