Reviews for The Island That Cleanses
Guest chapter 1 . 7/25/2023
Wow. Usually I find modern day AU’s cringey or weird but this was great. I loved how you didn’t feel the need to include every detail, as in every moment, for us to understand the storyline. I should have made a review in that chapter but the scene jump when they’re on the boat by themselves from swimming and getting out and jumping straight to the mature content was perfect and chefs kiss. I feel like if you detailed how they got to Zuko going down on her it wouldn’t have made as huge of an impact. Loved how you you just immediately brought us to the heat of the moment for that sex scene cus we already knew the sexual tension was there. So jumping to them already getting to business was perfect. All the scene jumps were great. For example when she needs to eat dinner with Toph and Aang. We didn’t need to have that scene im sure since you probably didn’t have any dialogue worth needing us to read in it, and just skipped over to the end of dinner to where she meets back with Zuko. The pacing was great. Def will check out your other work!
Cocofant chapter 7 . 8/8/2021
Thank you for writing.
Guest chapter 7 . 3/24/2021
I usually never leave reviews on fanfics and I NEVER read AUs I’ve just never been n interested, but oh my god... this was so amazing and beautiful! So well written and such an amazing story, their love felt so real and raw. I loved it so much I’ll never forget this fic. Well done ️
Guest chapter 7 . 9/13/2020
AMAZING! Start to finish!
Kyra chapter 7 . 7/27/2020
This was amazing!
JustGirlyThings chapter 7 . 7/10/2020
this was literally so amazing, 10/10 plot and downright GREAT writing
reyoboewan chapter 1 . 6/4/2020
I just love so much this story, it's perfect. Gives me so many emotions and beautiful feelings. 3
Guest chapter 4 . 6/1/2020
This story has been amazing! Honestly I don’t write reviews a lot, but I had to for this. I was skeptical about an AU for Zutara and this fic has exceeded my expectations so much. I can’t wait to finish and re-read it. I know you wrote this a while ago, but know there are still people who are enjoying this story! ~ Sandy
glowymani chapter 7 . 5/3/2020
this was so beautifully written! I absolutely loved every single part of it
Pentastic chapter 7 . 4/14/2020
I don't usually like modern AU's but third was pretty good. Very sweet ending. Great job!
Sofiarose clorib chapter 5 . 3/7/2020
Ahahaha,I can't stop laughing now,with the scene that both zuko and his father is making a scene at the same time, I imagined what if zuko didn't saw his father and just went kissing katara,then it would be like...bwahaha, he really is his father's son,now I know where he gets it all
iLuckyCharm chapter 6 . 1/8/2020
Omg your version of the Royal Fire Nation fam is soooo adorable in this AU
Amane Maki chapter 3 . 12/11/2019
Swap Husbands?! Hahahha
Guest chapter 7 . 8/28/2019
this is angsty smutty crazy rich Asians somehow
Guest chapter 7 . 4/12/2019
wow! you're stories are awesome i love them
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