|Reviews for Fill in the Blank Challenge|
| jsboneslover chapter 2 . 7/15/2013
Thanks. Nice portrait of Jack and Angela after that horrible experience.
| jazzyproz chapter 1 . 7/13/2013
I like when Brennan tells Booth he's too young for a heart attack - a perfect example of how literal she can be!
| threesquares chapter 1 . 7/13/2013
I love your opening. The physicality of his digging her out, finding a hand, and then the almost physical blow from the emotional realization that he is in love with her. Yay! And the details of the ways he touched her, had to touch her, to reassure himself and to, honestly, express his feelings. And how she noticed. Perfect!
I really really like that you managed to keep with cannon...Cam grabbing his hand doesn't have to mean that they are together, as you showed, and I love that you have Booth blurt out that he is in love with someone else! And then the best part, the smartest part, is how you had her figure it out from what Booth said (and probably from other things that he had noticed). And really great ending, their conversation. Both of them agreeing to help one another. Great story! I feel very pleased to have gotten to read a little early and to learn about how you write! Thank you for that and for this story! 3sq
| razztaztic chapter 1 . 7/13/2013
I love how you had Brennan immediately challenge Booth by asking if he was in love with her. That's our Brennan...never met a question she didn't like. :-D
Glad you participated!
| penandra chapter 1 . 7/11/2013
Thank you for your entry in the challenge! Excellent!