|Reviews for When Can I See You Again - A Captainsparklez FanFiction|
| punkrock chapter 35 . 3/5
lol i love when you comment on what is happening in the story so funny
| simplybirds chapter 1 . 2/10
Great story! Definitely the best CaptainSparklez fanfic around!
| Esperanza chapter 27 . 2/3
My favourite movie: Frozen (Disney) *Olaf!*
| Esperanza chapter 24 . 2/3
Umm... I dont know if youll reply me but... Ive been writing stories and fanfics for a while and as i was writing one about captainsparklez, i came across your writing. As i read, i saw that you've got potential. You're good with coming up with plots and twists. What if i help you with your stories and sorta edit it?
Here's my email:
| Esperanza chapter 18 . 2/2
Maybe you could re-read the chapters before posting them. There are some spelling and grammar mistakes.
Overall, i love the story
| EspVC1999 chapter 10 . 2/2
cliffhangers are good. you should include lots of them. it makes people want to read.
and btw, love your stories. they're the thing i turn to to cheer me up.
| nikki chapter 4 . 1/29
You are a good author!
| Sky-Sea-Earth chapter 38 . 1/23
This story is beautiful. Just beautiful. :)
| Ambassador Moon chapter 7 . 1/18
Don't diss the cookies...
$4 a box...
| Guest chapter 6 . 1/10
Um, well, is there a plot to this story, because its taking an awful long time to reach a climax, and alot of unneeded details like lynn and sushi and sweatpants. Its good though! (-:
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/13/2013
| safetycake chapter 8 . 12/9/2013
This is great! But theres one thing, please please dont make Jordan so emotional and stuff.
| Ben chapter 5 . 12/9/2013
I think you should do a superflat creative, I don't know why, I just think it would be fun!
| Me Myself and I chapter 18 . 12/1/2013
You are an amazing author and I get hooked on every chapter. Not saying you should not still write fanfics, but I beleive you could even right your own novel. Again, you are an amazing author and wtiter and I believe you could also do much much more with your talent.
| Guest chapter 22 . 11/27/2013
i love this story so much!