Reviews for Can you see my pain?
Jamie Ellea Tundra chapter 9 . 4/22/2014
Good to see a classic like this finshied. It was very good. Take some time to read mine please. Thnx! And take it easy on yourself.
Jamie Ellea Tundra chapter 8 . 3/16/2014
hey! when are you going to finish? we havent talked in forever. are you ok? love this all.
ThisDarknessSurroundsMe chapter 8 . 10/6/2013
Can you please tell me where to find the Revival?
Guest chapter 8 . 10/5/2013
GAHHHHH I WAS IN A HAPPY MOOD EARLIER AND THEN I READ THIS AND THE COVER ART AND AGHHHHHHHHHHHHH YOUR LIFE SOUNDS TOTALLY SHITTY TOO SO I HOPE OT GETS BETTER
TheOtaku2 chapter 8 . 10/5/2013
Loved this story! Also hope you're doing ok now:)
No longer at this account chapter 6 . 8/26/2013
Hey ummm...I have the same problem you do with my boyfriend every time I come over and were alone you know...stuff happens and I don't want it to I just wanna snuggle and watch crappy tv and laugh at it or play a video game...I'm not trying to hit on you or anything just wanted to let you know you have some one to take to if you need it
Sarah chapter 7 . 8/20/2013
I thought the cliffhanger was good.
The flashback into Alan's past was a nice touch, too. Though unpleasant to read, it added to the story.
ThisDarknessSurroundsMe chapter 7 . 8/20/2013
Oh shit..
TheOtaku2 chapter 7 . 8/20/2013
This is a fantastic story so far, can't wait to read more! Btw, this chapter wasn't boring at all, and I think you're a very good writer.
Jamie Ellea Tundra chapter 7 . 8/20/2013
Hey you. Look your doing great. Just know you can talk to me. I'll send you a pm with ways to contact me k?
Habeny chapter 1 . 8/14/2013
I love this story so much I don't even. Keep up the amazing work!
ThisDarknessSurroundsMe chapter 6 . 8/13/2013
this is such a good story!
Jamie Ellea Tundra chapter 6 . 8/13/2013
First off your doing great. I feel like Eric saying this but it's tough to deal with that 'shit'. I had a boyfriend that got controlling and I dropped the fbomb on him three times in the same sentence. Anyway I feel where your coming from. Sometimes though life isn't a romantic story or what we see on T.V. btw I feel like you "can see my pain" I was picked on like Alan but I'm clean and "striagte edge" I hope you finish this one. If you like you have the permission to use my O.C. u already know her name. It's my pen name. Keep up the good work comarde and you'll do fine
Yours in hand and sword
Jamie Ellea Tundra
Jean chapter 5 . 8/6/2013
Please write more! X3
ChildOfShadows chapter 4 . 7/21/2013
A few questions:
1) Is he back the actual past, or a world made by Alan's memories?
2) If he's in the actual past, isn't he changing it a lot?
3) If he's in the memory world, is he changing Alan's memories, or is it just a world created by Alan's memory?
4) Or is there another explaination (or is it just one of those go-with-it things?)

Sorry for the question barrage, I couldn't get it off my mind.
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