Reviews for PTB - SU 2013
deslyncullen chapter 1 . 8/1/2013
Good chapter. Very lemony. Great use of the stairs and I loved how he made her vocalize what she wanted. Loved the dirty talking.
LayAtHomeMom chapter 1 . 7/15/2013
Loved the canon E and B - I think the vamp angle really upped the urgency and heightened need. The dirty talk was great and worked because it was balanced. Great use of the stairs as well! Love, love, loved it! Awesome!
krida86 chapter 1 . 7/13/2013
Hey there fellow Smut University student! OOoooo Love that you did this so strongly linked to the Twilight Saga itself. I really love vampire stories, but I find them so difficult personally to write! I thought you did a really good job. Really enjoyed the "dirty talking" . Can't wait to see what else you'll write!
Daphodill chapter 1 . 7/13/2013
Hey there, fellow Smut U-er! Nice job on the homework.

I think you're more 2 Live Crew with all that dirty talk Edward was doing. I know I was blushing.

Good job!
EveryDayBella chapter 1 . 7/13/2013
AAAAHHHHHHH! Cannon Edward and Bella getting it on on the stairs. Love it so much. Great job!
GeezerWench chapter 1 . 7/12/2013
Liked that last line! Newborns should get distracted easily.

I liked how her urged her to talk dirty. I guess to see if she would do it, and she did.

There was some spelling/typo mistakes but those things happen.

I think you did a good job.
iluvTwilight154 chapter 1 . 7/11/2013
Omg! That was amazing