Reviews for Work in Progress
Shanza chapter 1 . 4/2/2014
Just finished the series, and I gotta say, it's really good.
You're a fantastic writer (I read your profile) and I hope you succeed in that dream of yours! That would be awesome :)
AlElizabeth chapter 1 . 1/31/2014
Man, you had me tearing up. Poor Sam. But Dean is such a good brother. Excellent fic and nice tie-in to the two previous ones. Keep up the great work!
Frakking Toasters chapter 1 . 1/10/2014
Geez! I love this verse! This was so good. Ripped my heart out again, though. Actual physical heart clenching pain occurred! Guess that means you're doing it right! xo
Guest chapter 1 . 9/6/2013
Love it, but I'm sure you can milk some more Comfort and Broments out of this situation.
How about a few rape nightmares, may Dean could have the nightmares of little Sammy getting raped. Then Sam would have to comfort Dean.
Dino-SOAR chapter 1 . 7/17/2013
I would love it if you did some more stories in this verse(:
Guest chapter 1 . 7/17/2013
There should be so much more to this.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/14/2013
Wonderful extension of the verse!

I know its weird, but I really want a story with Bobby and his reaction to what happened or something of the sorts...
BranchSuper chapter 1 . 7/12/2013
Excellent story!
SupernaturallyEgocentric chapter 1 . 7/12/2013
This is wonderful!
KKBELVIS chapter 1 . 7/12/2013
There's no real skill to the two men's fighting style. They've obviously had experience with bar fights but Dean hunts monsters and he moves with grace and agility unmatched by anyone but Sam
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Yes!

Loved every word.
Love Sam hiding behind his hair!
The guys just playing pool then trouble breaks out.

Now somehow I swore I read that story: AATWDD...but now I am not sure as I did not leave a review so have now put it on my book list.

Always engrossing your work is to me!
Thank you
Karen
Phx chapter 1 . 7/12/2013
Totally loved this. Perfect segment in this universe. My heart breaks for Sam, to be visually scarred, even a little bit, would be such a constant reminder to him. But, like Dean tells him, someday Sam will look in the Mirror and only see Sam, once again. And not be reminded of that terrible day. And until then Dean will continue to support him and help him heal. I loved how instantly dean was on guard and then there when it became obvious that something was up with Sam. Maybe the next time, those guys will learn some tact. Without even knownig what they said, I am pretty sure it wasn't a nice way of asking.
CeCe Away chapter 1 . 7/12/2013
I can't even critique you because everything you write is just so dang powerful and layered with emotion...except the emotion comes out through gestures and subtext behind their words...totally keeping in how guys relate. Love it. Have writer envy. Or I would except I'm always so freakin happy any time I see you've posted.

Ce
Guest chapter 1 . 7/12/2013
I know I shouldn't feel this way, but I love that Dean's first reaction after learning the cause of the fight was to turn around and go back to the bar. And of course Sam wouldn't let him.
Thanks for sharing this great story.
TG
Sparkiebunny chapter 1 . 7/12/2013
Fantastic. I love your concepts of moving on and healing, and how the reality of it is not as easy as we'd like to think - but there is always hope. Beautifully done Pixie. :)
zekeschance chapter 1 . 7/12/2013
Nice story. I like how you make the reader feel what the characters are going through.
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