Please let the one egg be a lucario egg and another egg being a Gardevoir, and either a Gliscor or Hawlucha. That would add some rather interesting pokemon to ranma’s team because right now he has thee pokemon but the max is 6. Unless you want to flip the script and make ranma’s chaos play apart and give me more you can add darkrai and greninja to the mix also if a trent which is a ghost and forest pokemon and help ranma with his astral projection and meditation training and to just pull on the ranma insanity you give him a very feminine fairy type like either Diancie/ Florges/ Primarina. I hope these ideas will bring you inspiration and future updates on this story.

Hey what about lucario the aura pokemon

I understand that this story must have had more than a decade of downtime but i still felt you deserved to know i liked what you wrote.

I especially loved the Jungle Book references from Pia's worldview and philosophy.

great work.

A shame this hasn't been updated in such a while

Please update the story soon I want to know what happens next also can you make I one of ranma Pokémon a snorlax, and possibly a dragon as well.

Next chapter: Ranma turns around and immediately nopes off to his forest where it’s safe

What a shame a story such as this isn't likely to be continued. This has a very intriguing plot line that appears to predate gen1 if my geometry is correct...(it's math ok what do you want). Based on that, I had a slight idea as to where this could possibly go (eventually) and was quite interested in seeing how it played out. Sadly though, as it's been a decade since it's last update, by all reasonable assumptions this isn't going to be continued. Which is a shame because this was written quite well, and had a decent flow along with compelling plot potential. Not to mention the often hilarious personalities of the characters (favorite by far being Pio...my spirit animal incarnate xD ). My only nit-pick, be it a small one, is trying to space your AN's and perception changes as it was a couples times confusing (initially) who was talking to who or talking at all. Backpeddling a little, I got it though so no biggie.
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Again, cool idea and execution. Just sad there isn't more.
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NICE!

Cool story

Rapidash! Rapidash! Ranma needs a Rapidash!

I like your story so far I hope you keep up with it.

Just stumbled upon this story again after years, and years and years and I have to say it's a good idea as I remember. It started out a bit hard to understand with all the points of view shifts, flash backs, flash forwards etc but it seemed to stabilize into a decent format after the first few chapters as the author hit their stride. Sadly like so many fics that I grew up on it was abandoned with no updates in about 8 years. Still a great piece of history here and sadly still one of the best Pokémon cross over's I have ever read. Incomplete as it is, the story at least went 25 chapters before stopping and it had a really good idea. Funny thing is I swear I remember reading more than is posted here, I don't know if it came from another website or a yahoo group back in the day but I remember stuff after this.

I think it's just a little sad to see one of the older fanfics on this site go unfinished. It's really good too. Really it's rare that I ever see these older fanfics. From what I have seen so far this story has a lot of potential, and I'm really interested in seeing where it goes (if you bother updating or you are dead). That is all. Zyte out.

For that last sentence, I can only hope Ranma didn't try to cook and eat the eggs thinking it was a peace offering of food...

Posting spoilers in your ANs seems to be a reliable way to bring your story to an early grave.

Sad but true.

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