|Reviews for That Fateful Day|
| dogluvva99 chapter 1 . 1/2
My inner fan picking up things that probably weren't there:
Rock beats scissors - Dean always does scissors
Dean ordering for Sam - I love it when you take charge like that Dean (Dean originally says this to Sammy)
| Acidspades chapter 1 . 9/21/2013
You're great at writing outsider POV!
| ispiltthemilk chapter 1 . 7/14/2013
So clever! Great job. Loved every inch of it. Suuuuuuuuuuuperb.
| Spirit Burner AKA Chick Feed chapter 1 . 7/13/2013
Ahhh. Knights without shining armour, gotta love 'em. Almost makes me want to be a waitress!
Keep on writing Hun :D
| hotshow chapter 1 . 7/12/2013
Very good story. Thank you.
| LilyBolt chapter 1 . 7/12/2013
This was great! I love the way you write outsider female POV stories. You have the perfect mix of "swooning" and storyline. Truly excellent work! :D My favorite line was " "You shouldn't have done that," Sam said. If I hadn't heard it, I would never have known that a guy with a puppy dog face could sound so scary and threatening. " It was so perfect!
| gopottergo11 chapter 1 . 7/12/2013
Amazing! Great job! :)
| DeansBabyBird chapter 1 . 7/12/2013
All I can say is I'd hang out in a diner if it had a clientele like Sam and Dean!
| RayneSummer chapter 1 . 7/12/2013
Wow, I loved this! Perfect view of Sam and Dean; always ready to help :) Well done!
| Jenmm31 chapter 1 . 7/12/2013
Ssooo good! Yay to sweetkiwk604 for giving you this idea. Your outsider POV's are great and provide something totally original to read. And I mean, who wouldn't want Sam and Dean to swoop in and save their day? Haha
| sweetkiwi604 chapter 1 . 7/12/2013
Ah! THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU! This was awesome! Poor Sherry :( Love how you kept the boys in character! :) Love it my dear!