|Reviews for The Flurry of Life|
| OriksGaming chapter 12 . 6/24
Argh, how could Harry have just said that a kiss from a beautiful girl/Veela didn't change anything about their relationship. :/
| OriksGaming chapter 11 . 6/24
A very good point. The other champions all had some crazy stuff happen to them throughout the tournament. Along with this, a lot of it happened in the third task. Krum getting Imperiused, Fleur getting the Cruciatus used on her by the controlled Krum, and Cedric, well, dying. I don't know if that last one could be counted as trauma, as he was dead at the moment he would have began to experience said trauma... Ok now I'm rambling. I'll just post the review
| OriksGaming chapter 10 . 6/24
Wow, sounded like Madam Pomfrey did some creepy things to Harry _
Probably not what you meant, but I have a teenage mind, and what it conjured this time was a little creepy.
| OriksGaming chapter 8 . 6/24
Lol, I'm surprised Sirius still got the two Veela in bed after that. Well, he is Padfoot, legendary charmer of the ladies. The ending was great. "I think 'tea' is code for sex!' xD
| OriksGaming chapter 7 . 6/24
Wow, this was a very depressing chapter...
| OriksGaming chapter 3 . 6/24
It's cinq and quatre, just in case you ever get around to fixing those
| DocSlendy chapter 6 . 5/4
Hmm, very nice.
| Guest chapter 3 . 5/4
Cinq has a q not a g. this was quite an enjoyable story.
| CrazyEvilCool chapter 3 . 2/25
It's cinq with a Q.
| datbenik513 chapter 31 . 2/11
I really enjoyed your flurry oneshot collection. In my humble opinion, Fleur Delacour is the most underrated and underestimated minor character of the Potterverse. She is so much more than her Veela heritage: a powerful, fiercely loyal, loving, caring person.
I really do hope you will find the inspiration to continue with this story. In the meantime, my own flurry novel, "I remember", might inspire you to do so, if you will allow me some shameless self-plug :D
Happy reading, happy writing!
| Trace Reading chapter 2 . 2/9
I really hope that anything you do in 2015 drops the phonetic accent, because EVERYONE does it and it's fucking PAINFUL to read.
You'd think you'd get tired of it yourself what with the multitude of Harry/Fleur snippets you've written.
What is wrong with people...
| nikki1314 chapter 31 . 12/14/2014
I really grew to Like Your One Shots. it's like a daily does of HarryXFleur. and its really fluffy and sweet and always puts a smile on my face. :) keep writing. I think you'd do well , writing a longer fic tho :) no pressure tho. as long as its HarryXFleur. :P Keep it up! Goodjob!
| Guest chapter 31 . 12/9/2014
Glad to know you are back to writing again. I love all the Harry/fleur moments
| PaC chapter 31 . 12/4/2014
If the rules allow it, you might put a note or move the A/N to the top, so people know this is sort of tied in with chapter four. As it is, chapter 30 and 31 are in a similar time period making them feel "squashed" together and not fitting well. Readers having to push back and remember each chapter is independent and not at first try to have briefly link 30 and 31 rather than treat them as unrelated stories. With them similar enough for the time period, there is a tendency to try to merge 30 and 31, briefly, while figuring out they don't really relate. I sure don't recall "chapter 4" off the top of my head. I suppose you'd lose fav and review numbers breaking this into volumes. But you might consider some day, using A/N to warn current readers, IF A/N's are allowed at the top, for a future reorganizing of the chapters, to put those that are like sequels sequentially, renumbering and reshuffling the order of the chapters, so a "sequel" appears after its prequel.
| Triforcevita chapter 31 . 12/2/2014
So fleur is still with bill in this one? Defeats the point of your fanfic lol.