Reviews for Prisoner of the Magic Kingdom
Alex Warlorn chapter 1 . 9/24/2013
So they let him go, because all their torment STILL wasn't as awful as the abuse his grown up children would put him through?
Guest chapter 1 . 7/15/2013
Creepy in the tradition of Stephen King.
JjennamichiJ chapter 1 . 7/12/2013
Reaction while reading: Oh... Oh my... OH MY GOD. HOLY SHIT FUCK FUCK I KNEW THAT RIDE WAS EVIL!

You, sir (or female sir) are a great writer. The only thing I have to say is that you should re-read the piece very carefully, because you forgot a few letters here and there. great story!