|Reviews for Spell It Out|
| harmonious chapter 1 . 4/17
I can't say I'm the biggest fan of the formatting but other than that this is great! Characters are well written and everything is very believable. I loved all of this.
| fncmullin chapter 1 . 2/19
What a lovely story with such a beautiful ending. Well done.
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/23/2016
Just one question - after they are given the book, Hermione sees that Harry's word is 'Devotion'. Why then does he ask her what 'semper' means? Semper is Latin for 'Always', like in the Marine motto Semper Fidelis (always faithful)
| A.Tigerose chapter 1 . 3/26/2016
what were Harry's words then?
| ODD CANDY chapter 1 . 2/8/2016
I guess I wished heir was an explanation on why Severus did not end up with Lily when they were soul mates. Unless I was just confused on the whole thing?
| novonia chapter 1 . 12/5/2015
Hi, I very much enjoy this story and so I wanted to share an idea or two with you. One would be for a cute little omake you could add to the end of this about Lavender and her words turning red shortly after she announces its no harm having fun before she settles down, no idea what he words are or who they are for but I think it'd be interesting to read a little something about her guy (or girl) hearing her statement and deciding they would rather be alone than with someone so shallow and unfaithful (because she knows someone out there is just for her and still 'played' with Ron).
Another idea could be another little one shot like this and in the same 'universe' where Snape has black words to start off with but when he say 'mudblood' they turn red, where James had red words (maybe mudblood?) that turn black when he finally grows up in 7th year. Perhaps Lilys words could match the either of them. You could probably even start the story in the same setting.
3 really love this story, happy holidays 3
| madval29 chapter 1 . 11/23/2015
I love this story!
| wschiffler chapter 1 . 11/13/2015
Really cool take on the soul mate idea!
| Glitter Poisoned My Blood chapter 1 . 8/14/2015
I literally can never forget this story cause I love it so much and ugh my heart. The feels. OW.
| senawario chapter 1 . 8/1/2015
very unusual story - I loved it; thank you!
| MrsPotterDrEw chapter 1 . 7/11/2015
Oh, God, this deserves to be a fully fleshed out story, it's that good, I honestly loved it to bits. Definitely one of my favourite Harry & Hermione one shots ever.
| wiccaantje xxx chapter 1 . 12/4/2014
I just read this story for the first time,
and then I've read it again
5 times so far. It's just so good, I wish there was more, but it is also perfect just the way it is. Even after 5 times I just want to read it again. It's absolutely beautiful.
| Tcolt chapter 1 . 9/9/2014
What an unexpectedly nice story! I don't like the soul mates premise in the stories, but this one was executed perfectly. Thank you!
| bellachaos chapter 1 . 8/8/2014
Really interesting concept, and well written too.
| chris7100 chapter 1 . 3/22/2014