I get her knee jerk reaction to believe it’s Loki, but why do I get the feeling these dreams and visions l she’s having are her powers/abilities awakening?

As much as I hate this it makes so much more sense.
There are countless stories where Loki finds love and despite having HER at his side still makes all the wrong choices which lead to the events of Avengers.
Him being hurt, feeling abandoned and being WITHOUT her makes so much more sense.

The scene between her and Loki in her chambers is just so perfect!

In romance novels this kind of misunderstanding (you think so little of me?) leads only to further misunderstanding. Usually.
Here it is resolved by his confession, which is rare and so beautiful.

Seeing that is is a long time ago you wrote/posted something I don't know if this finds you, but I really love this story so far.

What a great story! Thanks so much for your time and work! The plot, the characters! And your writing is so good!

How can I pay you for this? This is WAY too good to be free

Ahhh. My heart aches. You are a tre mastermind! I loved this story, and I can't wait to read the rest of the series.

To paraphrase the song from "Into the Woods," I'm in agonyyy!

Oh, my heart breaks for my favourite couple.

Hello, fellow fan of Florence and the Machine! I am in love with this story, and Eirlys and Loki were particularly adorable in this chapter.

Oh, man what an ending to the chapter! That was a real punch to the gut. I am enjoying this story immensely.

This is —hands down— the best Loki fanfic I have ever read. So beautifully written and well-arranged. Phenomenal character development. This story is wonderful and captivating, I wish this could be made into a film. Thank you for creating this.

This is truly wonderful, even though there were a few inconsistencies and errors in text. Overall, I'd read this again! Really pulls at the heartstrings in all directions and so compelling. I'm glad at several of the plot development choices you made; particularly what is arguably the biggest plot change. it's heartbreaking but it was exactly how I expected Eirlys to act. Here's to hoping that you don't just follow the cannon plot going forward! On to part 2!

I just want to say this is definitely one of the best Loki stories Girl you're so talented. I love and appreciate your work

I absolutely love this this story. It is well written, and the plot is fantastic.
I would also like to talk about something I noticed in the beginning.
In most stories, the OC meets Loki and they talk for 2 chapters and we have Loki already feeling stuff.
Its so quick, and when they talk, he is already being vulnerable.
THIS DOES NOT APPLY TO YOU.
while this is fine to me, it doesn't fell very realistic when I think about it.
However, with you, Loki doesn't immediately become vulnerable and love at first sight and stuff.
He gets to know her, and she shows him who she is and it takes a while.
I found this incredible and a breath of fresh air.
Also, I thought Loki's eyes were green, but I looked it up, and I found out that they changed in the movies
Avengers blue eyes, ragnarok green eyes.
I will go off to read the sequel and let you know what I think!
You did a great job on this.