Reviews for Burning The Ashes
AmiliaKnisely chapter 11 . 2/7
KEEP GOING! I LOVE THIS!
Guest chapter 13 . 10/6/2016
Make a trilogy
Guest chapter 13 . 9/1/2016
It was but why did you give four a second chance there should be no second chance and have tris leave him or something he had and affair and it wasn't fair to tris to what h*ll she's been throughout! And then after a while four or Tobias tries to find a way make up with tris or he can just continue in his misery! I don't care what but it's a good story :D
Guest chapter 4 . 5/6/2016
omg are the people in the stories rabbits
Guest chapter 13 . 12/26/2015
I cannot believe Eric killed Jake he is suck a dick like he could've been with you them if it wasn't for Eric's jealousy grrrr but good fanfic it was cool
Guest chapter 2 . 12/26/2015
OMFGGGGGG SAYYYYYY YESSSSSSS TRIS
Guest chapter 13 . 8/7/2015
that was so amazing i cried so much at the end.
Guest chapter 9 . 7/9/2015
How could you kill Jake
Guest chapter 5 . 7/8/2015
I love the story but i got really confused and stopped. And yes, I did read into the fire
ArgntumAlphaLupus chapter 4 . 5/23/2015
Usually I don't comment on the stories until the end but I totally noticed that you used the name Thalia. Do you like Percy Jackson? And was that Thalia you put in there Thalia as in Thalia Grace?
mh chapter 13 . 4/29/2015
that was such a sad ending I cant believe you killed Jake it would have been better if you killed tris because otherwise it doesn't do justice to her chacter and I didn't really like into the fire. It would be really good if you did a fanficton of Niyah in abnegation.
sf002300 chapter 7 . 3/27/2015
Saddest. Ending. Ever. . . .
Phoenix Brooke chapter 2 . 3/14/2015
I SWEAR IF EITHER OF THEM DIE...
yebfourq chapter 13 . 2/27/2015
Why did you kill jake. oh my gosh I cried that was horrible. I think you shuld have had four beat eric up. or somthing
MortalInstruments2946 chapter 5 . 10/14/2014
I think Tobias Jr. (TJ) would be cute! Also there's Jace, Alec, Simon, and Micheal! I love all of those names! Gabriel, Caleb, and James too!
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