|Reviews for Sage|
| TrentIsAnAuthor chapter 92 . 9/21
If this was verbal, nothing would be coming out of my mouth right now. I am utterly speechless. You wrote a story full of heart wrenching turns and hurts and somehow made the tone of the story hopefull. I no not whether you will ever read this, but even if you do not, know this in your heart of hearts: you did what few can, and you did it better than most all. Congratulations, and thank you.
| Framework chapter 59 . 9/18
Hehe. Fairy Tail reference.
| thebestofall chapter 1 . 9/16
The rinnegan?! Holy Shit... Damn. I LOVE THIS
| Nefarious127 chapter 65 . 9/9
I read some of the other reviews and people don't know what the hell they're talking about. I'd like to see them write something like this. I think that this fic is by far one of the best that I have ever read.
| Eric chapter 52 . 9/6
Naruto puede convocar a orochimaru cuando quiera ..
| stylo1 chapter 66 . 9/5
letting someone live who reached immortality through the deaths of thousands because you can is like saying well you earnt your immortality so i let you live. sigh morality of stupid monks
| stylo1 chapter 51 . 9/5
your story is to long, even in fights you manage to draw it out so much it just breaks the story
| stylo1 chapter 28 . 9/5
no one would have the balls to random name an orphan uzumaki while there is absolutly no connection. its a hight of arogance and will only get the child in trouble. this versiin of naruto you wrote would def realise that, so yea lie failed
| stylo1 chapter 24 . 9/4
so that is 3 stolen biju, 1 priceless artifact and betrayal of hachibi' trust. this is the guy that wants peace? cause it aint working
| stylo1 chapter 19 . 9/4
"thank you naruto" the blonde just tipped his head slightly with a smile.
"it's no problem;
here you imply that the first line is said by naruto while he is tipping his head with a smile, and the second line is the response to it is the opposite, it is knly clear because the thank you is directed at naruto.
you say thank you then have naruto reply with body language skip a line then have his verbal response, its like leaving a empty line in the middle of a sentence. although in this example it is quite clear you do this all time, mostly not while not so clear. i am no expert in gramma seeing as im selftaught with only basic english schooling soij wouldnt know. but wheter or not this is correct it is confusing and disrupting for no reason
| Monster King chapter 93 . 9/4
| Luciendar chapter 3 . 8/29
Master Chukaku sounds like Yoda. Hate leads anger and the dark side of the force.
| stylo1 chapter 1 . 8/28
so when he was 7 he broke into the hokage office, cracked a safe found a hidden compartment and no one noticed. yep that is konoha security for you
| chronos136 chapter 93 . 8/27
Ah, the end huh, it’s been a journey, traveling through nations, meeting new people, saving loved ones. Yet as all good things, it must come to an end. I have read a great number of stories and the well written, creative and enthralling stories always get a positive review. Yet I am unsure what words I could say to properly convey the amount of awe and joy I felt reading this. I have no reassurances to offer, no words of advice, no criticism. Just a smile, a slow clap, and a soft...perfect.
| WoflMan chapter 71 . 8/24
2nd time in a row where he can solve all of his problems by just summoning his friends to him, only to have it be conveniently blocked.