|Reviews for Sage|
| Foxstar - Founder of FoxClan chapter 85 . 35m ago
Well... How is Naruto getting out of this one?
| Datakim chapter 85 . 1h ago
Good chapter. I will say that Deva should only be able to use CT if Nagato is nearby, but I guess it would make sense that he might have brought his wheelchair-transmitter closer than in canon, since he knew he was facing another rinnegan user.
There are two immediate issues that I can think of. In canon, Naruto was in 6 tailed state when Nagato used CT, and likely to survive. That afterall was the point. If Nagato kills Naruto, Kyuubi might take who knows how long to respawn. And since Naruto is in his squishy flesh body here, I wonder if it makes sense for Nagato to use something thats basically fatal to humans. You should think of some justification for why Nagato is going for such lethal technique here.
The second issue that Deva puppet is Yahikos body, but given how close Naruto is to Deva, in order for CT's gravitational pull to capture Naruto, it also has to capture Deva too. Granted, it is a dead corpse, but being crushed by CT would basically turn Yahikos corpse into liquid and make him unfixable. Odd that Nagato would be so willing to do that and destroy Yahikos body. Infact, can Nagato even maintain the technique if Deva is destroyed? I guess its ok for Nagato to still maintain the technique. It is ultimately his chakra thats maintaining the CT.
Naruto should be able to use his chains to anchor himself to the ground and hang on a lot longer, so Deva should be crushed quite a bit faster. Naruto has also demonstrated a technique that increases the gravitation pull of earth(downwards), which should realistically work to counter some of the pull of the CT (upwards), if used on himself. Though that should not really be his primary concern.
I got the impression that Naruto and Deva are still pretty close to Konoha. Using CT should be utterly catastrophic to Konoha then, and kill basically everyone there within minutes. Naruto should realise that CT will kill everyone, and be willing to do anything to stop it (risk drawing far more power from Kurama, risk going to SM, risk trying to "hack" into Nagato via Devas rods to stop it, or whatever), given that you have consistently written him as very protective of life.
Though even if he does manage to stop it before Konoha is utterly crushed, most of the buildings would likely be torn upwards in just a few moments, so it seems Konoha is presumably screwed as far as buildings and infrastructure go, regardless.
| Rialga chapter 85 . 1h ago
Oh crap, Pein is doing that jutsu pretty much in the middle of the village. In the manga, it had been quite awe-inducing to see, but in the village... damn, it's quite terrifying. Just how will Naruto be able to counter it? And good job to Fuu on taking down Konon.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
P.S. oh yeah, I definitely plan to sign that petition once I find it.
| KingRamses chapter 85 . 3h ago
Dud Fuu make it? I sure hope so...and what's about to happen between Pein and Naruto? I need to know...update soon, please
| Riku Uzumaki chapter 85 . 3h ago
I can't wait to see how Naruto works his way out of this one.
| Anom chapter 85 . 4h ago
So Pein can just absorb any chakra attack no problem but the Bujii powered Naruto can't? He gets knocked pack from the force. That makes no sense if the attack is pure chakra and he absorbs the chakra there is no attack. And this indicates that Pein has more chakra than Naruto again illogical an Naruto is a jinchūriki and don't tell me his Rinnegan helped because Peins was implanted while Naruto is a natural born Rinnegan user so it's benefits would actually help him in ways it wouldn't help Pein. I love this story it is easily my favorite of this type and probably my favorite in this section but you seem to be going the out powered route instead of out skilled or experience based which I don't think works as well as Pein should by all reason be weaker but more skilled and experienced. Not a fatal flaw though I enjoy this story to much to stop reading.
| mundanebeast chapter 85 . 3h ago
| Winnieflutters chapter 85 . 4h ago
So excited for the next chapter! Good luck!
| Wondering Knight chapter 85 . 4h ago
lol I love all these SOPA notes. Not sure but getting 100k signatures does nothing. It didn't do anything last time. SOPA last time lost only because they wanted to implement other things to it. Wishful thinking on everyones part to think an e petition means anything.
Great story and can't wait for the next chapter.
| Guest chapter 85 . 6h ago
can't wait for the next chapter
| Aldhie chapter 85 . 6h ago
Wait for another chapter...
| Battle neurosis chapter 85 . 5h ago
Signed it! Hopefully, it will exceed 100000 within march!
| Ymere chapter 85 . 5h ago
I have signed the petition and I am sure that most if not all your fans will too but I hope you made your effect bigger than that it needs to be on facebook and every other thing you can think of.
Also great chapter. I really hope you pull naruto out of bitch mode soon. We all know he possesses far far more power than nagato is even capable of dreaming of and that is before the bijuu who have chosen their father's successor get involved. I know he risking getting hurt right now but he seriously used more power against yagura. It is time he stood up or everything he is protecting will be lost the bijuu, fuu, and his dreams for real peace all of it.
| shugokage chapter 85 . 5h ago
| roboguy45 chapter 85 . 6h ago
LOL wonder if Naruto will leave the leaf after this peacefully or will he have to show his might and bust a few heads.