Bro dixon is a d1 rage baiter

I know people may say differently but this book was amazing great job writing it

annnnnnnnnnd you made him a stuttering beta loser. man you realty dont know how to write an actually appealing character, huh?

why is naruto so fucking retarded? like he keeps on saying the most braindead stupid shit, its obnoxious.

this "turn the other cheek" retardation NEEDS to stop. they imprisoned her and tortured her for years and all he has to say is "walk away" ? how are you THIS bad at writing?

terrible writing. bad story.

annnnd you made naruto into a retard to push the plot. awful writing.

nope. im done. the dialogue is just way too bad. you obviously have no idea how to write age appropriate characters, because every single person sounds like the same type of highly educated adult.

he. is. a. child. why the fuck is he talking like a fully grown highly educated adult?

timeskip please. please? i do NOT care about tiny child naruto like even a little.

well that felt...unnecessary. tho i guess SOMETHING had to push the plot forward, and the ramen people are as good a sacrifice as any.

alguien ha encontrado un leyendo de esta historia? simplemente espero poder leer un leyendo de esta historia ya qué es increible

This story was absolute gold! Loved till the very end.

Yet another western belief that goodness and light, can exist without darkness. Its the backbone behind Taoist philosophy, Light and dark may be separate, but they are necessary components of the whole. Too much righteousness can be as bad as too much wickedness, it can lead to self-righteousness and arrogance.

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