Reviews for Mind Games
TheWayofLife-447 chapter 5 . 1/3
sigal5 chapter 4 . 9/11/2016
I can't blame anyone but Beckett herself for her plight. She acted like a fool to go to Josh's place and then heartily accepted his offer to hug. She was even thinking of 'love making' with O
dopeysac chapter 20 . 9/12/2016
What a great story. I started over the weekend and finished today. Looking forward to more.
yael135 chapter 17 . 8/26/2016
I love your writing! It's so funny that I didn't know that Ariel earns in Hebrew lion of God and I'm from Israel
CaskettAlways2009 chapter 8 . 7/23/2016
I just found your story and as much as I love it...I love your disclaimers more!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/12/2016
Could you tag this as a rape trigger warning? I was reading and had to stop part way through because of her rape and PTSD, so before you trigger other people, you should mention it in the description.
cruise1213 chapter 20 . 4/30/2016
It was a good story.
Purple Satin chapter 8 . 4/12/2016
Wow! You've done an incredible job with you can elicit such raw, pure emotion and reduce your readers to tears the way you just did to me, you're doing a great job! Thank you! Can hardly wait to read the next chapter.
Purple Satin chapter 5 . 4/12/2016
This is excellent! Cannot wait to get from chapter to chapter. Thank you!
I'm Widget chapter 20 . 3/17/2016
Sweet. I'll begin reading the next story in the bunch soon. No more time to read today. I love this universe.
I'm Widget chapter 19 . 3/14/2016
Sweet! So that's how Ariel came into the world. I can't imagine being naked with the entire family looking on. No. Way! lol
I'm Widget chapter 18 . 3/13/2016
Love this. They're so protective of her.
I'm Widget chapter 17 . 3/13/2016
What a perfect day!
I'm Widget chapter 16 . 3/13/2016
Sweet. I'm glad Meredith was so thoughtful.
I'm Widget chapter 15 . 3/13/2016
Oh, sweet! I love this. And I love when that happens with a story. I'm an author, and I don't plot, either. I write by the seat of my pants and let the characters take the reins. I've tried plotting but it didn't work for me. The characters took over anyway! g
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