Reviews for Moratorium
zealous soul chapter 1 . 20h
I already read this fic but Im just commenting about or asking about something. Do you have any thoughts about making a sequel of Moratorium like how they try to invade other universe and succeed? I think it will be epic.
fridelain chapter 4 . 9/13
Accio is a thing. As is using legilimency on, or imperiusing Crookshanks. And telling Remus and Sirius to make another one, pronto.

"If the map is not in my hands within the hour, our friendship is over and done with. And if you ever steal from me again, I will kill your cat. smiles"

If you want to get rid of the map, do better, that's just poor railroading.
Guest chapter 7 . 9/12
Absolutely brilliant.
JimSilver chapter 7 . 9/7
Wasn’t sure at first but the story drew me in and am now a fan! Great work!
aamlkb chapter 5 . 7/27
This story is so awesome! I love all the twist and turns! Thanks again.
a fan of this chapter 2 . 7/21
well... I haven't read much more than in my previous review... but MONSIEUR? "HARRY" is English, not French... it's terrible to speak like that and I, who need a translator to read this story, find it even more horrible and ridiculous, because it doesn't look good... I'm about to abandon a story that I like because you have to put MONSIEUR instead of SR... and since you don't stop making "HARRY" speak all the time and in all the sentences he has to say MONSIEUR again, it makes it exhausting to read and honestly makes it not enjoyable...

In any case, I doubt that you will read this review, let alone change it...
a fan of this chapter 1 . 7/21
I like this story (for the little I've read of it so far, which has been a couple of paragraphs) what I don't understand is why you call a girl HARRY when HARRY is the name of a BOY... couldn't you put her harriet? or any similar name but FEMALE?
Charlesincharge3 chapter 7 . 7/8
IAmSoTired chapter 1 . 6/30
10/10 novel, the only novel with that ship for Harry that I've enjoyed.
Mr-Luca-Wolf chapter 7 . 5/21
Im so sad to see this end but 10/10 love ya man great story absolutely no complaints
Mr-Luca-Wolf chapter 7 . 5/21
Beautiful absolutely beautiful
Mr-Luca-Wolf chapter 3 . 5/19
So Harry in M are split personalities
Mizuki Nagasaki chapter 7 . 2/24
you gave yourself the best opening to a sequel follow it please
Taryth chapter 1 . 2/6
Looking back on the economy of the brothel. If they are getting rich off of a fraction of a fraction of what the prostitutes are taking in, then the prostitutes wouldnt stay prostitutes, being so rich at that point.

Even if the profits were reversed, and the workers were getting 20% they would be considerably wealthy.
Solar28 chapter 4 . 1/27
Los campeones estan involucrados por jugadores de quidditch
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