omg this was brilliant. didn't know i needed it til i read it. loved it

Ah, yeah, you mentioned the soul fragment now too. Would be interesting either way

Harry handled the Pettigrew situation really well, I think. Didn't lose her reason even when she got angry, rightfully so

Wait, at first I thought Harry just has multiple personality disorder or something like that. Now I'm thinking that Moratorium might actually be the horcrux in her

This Harry's very smart. It's nice, there aren't many smart Harrys. I like it

Very interesting so far!

Danger obsession? It would make a lot of sense. And it would make it fun to see what kind of danger Harry will get herself into with her obsession! But is it danger or adrenaline that she’s obsessed with? I can’t tell.

Is this a fem Harry/Oliver?! SCREAMING!

This was brilliant. I didn’t even know I needed a seedy criminal underground fanfic until now and I’m off to find some more!

I think it would have been more fitting for Hermione to have gotten prefect...

aw. I was hoping for some Harry vs Krum flying

why is Oliver still in Hogwarts?

I liked this story.
Such a work to conquer the world

I am in LOVE with this story.
Okay first, your expansion on Harry’s experience with “his relatives” is amazing. (Not that I wish that on anyone.) I am similarly of the belief that his life was worse than specificly shown in the books. And then you brought out actual trama responses ‘chefs kiss’ beautiful. It is so realistic and an amazing expansion on the original character. You fully made harry your character and she is so beautiful. All of the intricate details that make her Harry and you brought them out in a work of art.
Also your attention to the mental health and the realistic use and application of DID just… there are no words. It is both heart wrenching and heart warming to see this brought to life.
There were parts of this story that made me laugh uncontrollably and there were parts that made me cry.
There was so much about this that I love but I honestly can’t find the words.
Thank you for this wonderful work of art!

This chapter have lots of Harry's development! With her friends, pet, Moratorium, and Tom! Love that they getting closer! And wow Efface is really an interesting OC! I wonder what kind of vow he made for Harry? Something like protector maybe? He's like a knight Moratorium chose well

This chapter is amazing as usual!
Wooww I see more interactions between Moratorium and Tom here XD
Moratorium could be scary too when he wants