Reviews for Elena
Karen Leah chapter 1 . 5/7/2021
Sick Bitch
Cathy Lovelady chapter 1 . 2/26/2021
I loved this end for her. I wondered what was killing her.
nzjojo chapter 1 . 9/3/2020
What a sad woman - you have her pegged. This is just how I imagined her to be. Thank you for sharing this insight. :)
Pleasingjennifer chapter 1 . 12/11/2019
This was good . I wish you would write about others in this context ... You brought it home ..
Munkeyfump20 chapter 1 . 8/28/2019
Thanks for the read.
Jojo31055 chapter 1 . 5/15/2018
Interesting story. I liked it. Thank you.
Fictionlover2005 chapter 1 . 11/10/2016
I really like what you did here. Don't misunderstand me, I despise this character; but I also know that in life nothing is black or white even, or especially, when it seems to be exactly that. You presented a perspective here that most would never even consider. Personally I think you were too kind, but it doesn't change the fact that I applaud you for putting this story out here.
Jenniferdevonsimon chapter 1 . 8/22/2016
Poor poor Elena...hell no die bit
bmckenzie chapter 1 . 12/27/2015
Good writing. I appreciate how you tried to get into her mind. But after reading your first story with Christian's facing the abuse she did to him I cannot sympathize with her.
skylar22 chapter 1 . 4/20/2015
I've been a fan for a while, i can't wait until you Finnish your last story fifty shades full circle , and i love how you ended the bitch trolls life. Thanks for being apart of fan fiction, and making it worth my time.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/4/2015
Very nice chapter... Wish for more
Mitzi1958 chapter 1 . 12/30/2014
Sad but I still think you were to nice about her. Yes I believe she had demons but it gave her no right to take and use a 15 year old boy who had demons of his own to fight over. She gave him only more demons, she gave him more self doubt, self hatred and what is so sad in your story she knew it was wrong but couldn't stop herself. What does it say about her that she knew it was wrong and when everything came out, she wasn't adlut enough to say she was sorry to Christian, and esp., to Grace. Yes she betrayed Christian, his innocence but she betrayed Grace in such an awful more way. Grace befriended her and this was the thanks Grace got,seduce and abuse her son who was already broken. However Elena dies in any story of fanfiction she can never atone for her sins and end in the end dies alone, sad.
posses45 chapter 1 . 8/19/2014
good ridden... bitch troll Elena.
sammieannelane chapter 1 . 12/31/2013
Weird, different and awesome, the old bitch troll is dead.

Happy New Year !
Guest chapter 1 . 12/10/2013
That was great, but can you write more about Elean's back round, how she became to be the way she is.
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