Reviews for A Doctor's Man
NonOmnisMoriar chapter 16 . 8/30/2013
These two can never catch a break, can they?
I hope Shepard, at least, takes her with him when he has the Normandy again.

NOM
NonOmnisMoriar chapter 15 . 8/23/2013
Though an eye for details is without a shred of doubt very important in storytelling, you must be very careful not to lose yourself in adding too much detail.
The human mind often adds details automatically to form a picture without the need to have all the details written down meticulously.
Your progress as a writer is more than obvious to anyone that has been following your stories from the beginning!
By experimenting with different writing styles you will, no doubt, progress even more.

As always, this chapter was a pleasure to read!

NOM
NonOmnisMoriar chapter 14 . 8/23/2013
A sad, but necessary, chapter.
This way the reunion will be so much sweeter!

NOM
NonOmnisMoriar chapter 13 . 8/14/2013
I never liked Ashley. And after getting that self-righteous speech of her on Horizon, I started to like her even less!
Shepard's got himself a girl now who's a hundred times better than that condescending b...ehh...woman.

NOM
NonOmnisMoriar chapter 12 . 8/12/2013
Too bad he didn't take her with him!
But this was very enjoyable too!

NOM
Chaszcz chapter 12 . 8/11/2013
great story I can't wait for more
NonOmnisMoriar chapter 11 . 8/8/2013
Sigh...
That was great!
A very rewarding chapter for both the reader and the story.

NOM
NonOmnisMoriar chapter 10 . 8/4/2013
Good chapter. We learn a lot more about her character this time.
And it's evident that she is a strong woman.
I'm looking forward to them reuniting again!

NOM
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Darth Renatus chapter 9 . 8/2/2013
Very nice. Hope to see them reunited next chapter.
NonOmnisMoriar chapter 9 . 8/2/2013
Phew! That was hard to read. It was incredibly well written, but also very sad.
I'll be honest with you, at the end of this chapter I was crying my eyes out.

NOM ...
NonOmnisMoriar chapter 8 . 7/27/2013
They really are a great couple. With the beginning of ME2 this couple will have to face some serious trouble

Thanks again for a wonderful chapter.

NOM
NonOmnisMoriar chapter 7 . 7/27/2013
That was a fine chapter indeed!

NOM
BlackWidow10.27 chapter 6 . 7/26/2013
damn update soon
NonOmnisMoriar chapter 6 . 7/22/2013
Well then my thanks for enjoying this chapter so much also goes to Veyron!
I can't wait for the second part of this story!

Thanks Dark

NOM
NonOmnisMoriar chapter 5 . 7/21/2013
Ha! I love that part where Anderson knocks Udina out cold.
That was very satisfying to watch.
Thank you for another great chapter.

NOM
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