Reviews for She's What Makes Me Tick
tfatf42 chapter 8 . 3/23/2016
This is a really sweet story, love it. I wish the updates weren't so far appart, but I understand, some people have a life and stuff.
Lizlovesmusic chapter 6 . 8/30/2014
This is adorable. I love how easily Chloe can read beca and how sweet beca is to Chlo keep up the good work!
ballpointmf chapter 5 . 2/20/2014
good
atty.jannie chapter 3 . 8/22/2013
Ooooohhhh!
Can't wait to read more!
acaeverything chapter 2 . 7/18/2013
I'm so proud of how far this has come! Keep going amigo!
acaeverything chapter 1 . 7/14/2013
I like it! And I think it definitely has potential! But I do have a few things to suggest on improvement? I feel like everything moved really fast. And it jumped unceremoniously to the next conversation. Maybe slow the pace and add more descriptions?

Also, when someone speaks, it's best to write on a new line like:
"Yes Beca you'll be coming to college here in the fall and I think you should broaden your horizon and look at some new activities".
"Ughhhhh I DJ that's pretty much full time stuff".
"Well maybe you'll find something even better than DJing"

This also really helps the audience to keep up with who's saying what. (and similarly with thoughts CAN be in italic, but that's more writers preference)

ANYWAY, I'm looking forward to the next chapter :D
Monkeyfuncky chapter 1 . 7/13/2013
Very good defo write another chapter
Guest chapter 1 . 7/13/2013
hey, this seems promising. my only concern is the formatting (i.e. centered, constricted into one paragraph...) which is easily fixable. :)
Guest chapter 1 . 7/13/2013
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