Reviews for Hidden In The Ice
Fluttershy7120 chapter 12 . 6/24/2014
Cool story. It's actually a good read, despite not being the type of story I'd normally look at. I'm glad I took the time to read this one :) you are a good writer, but I've spotted a few grammar mistakes, and a small amount of spelling mistakes. Not many, but a few. Maybe I could look it over and message you what I found, maybe you can touch it up, if you want.
thatcrazyjellyfish chapter 12 . 3/16/2014
cant wait for the next chapters great story
thatcrazyjellyfish chapter 11 . 3/16/2014
once again ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo nooonooonnoooonooo jaack
thatcrazyjellyfish chapter 10 . 3/16/2014
ahhhh your making me so emotional i think if some one says one word to me im gonna cry great story
thatcrazyjellyfish chapter 9 . 3/16/2014
sadness thats alli can say why must you make me feel so many emoitons
thatcrazyjellyfish chapter 8 . 3/16/2014
ahhhhhhhhhhhhh noooooooooooooooo nooo noonoooo nooo noooo jack
thatcrazyjellyfish chapter 7 . 3/16/2014
crazy intense
thatcrazyjellyfish chapter 6 . 3/16/2014
ahhh so intense but so good
thatcrazyjellyfish chapter 5 . 3/16/2014
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
thatcrazyjellyfish chapter 4 . 3/16/2014
ahhhh trying to work out if he did thodse things , if he did them but in his sleep or he didnt do them
thatcrazyjellyfish chapter 3 . 3/16/2014
ahh its so good trying to work out whats truly happening and whats not
thatcrazyjellyfish chapter 1 . 3/16/2014
cool start to the story
Guest chapter 12 . 2/17/2014
TheStarsInTheSkyShineSoBright chapter 12 . 1/17/2014
...whhyyyyyyyyyyyyy?! Cliff hanger
Gabwolfgirl chapter 12 . 11/18/2013
I really hope you write more soon. I LOVE this story.
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