|Reviews for Two halves, one soul|
| Cerulean Twin chapter 3 . 3/7
| RomiDi chapter 3 . 12/17/2013
Yes, you are a creep Toki but I love that *w* dsdasss *Q*
Sorry for taking so long, sis *heart*
When will you update? I want MOAR o3o
| Princess Unikitty chapter 3 . 12/10/2013
Hi bud, this chapter was pretty dang cool. Keep up the good work
| RomiDi chapter 2 . 12/1/2013
You are such an incredibly amazing writer sis u.u
I loved this, I wish it continued! Dx
| Hope Woods 10 chapter 2 . 8/19/2013
This chapter was pretty well paced. I like the interaction between the two brothers. I am not sure how I feel about "sweatdropped", but I don't really dislike it. I also just realized that I love how your chapters end with "cliffhangers", but not in the way that some stories have it where it feels forced. I can't wait for the next chapter.
| Princess Unikitty chapter 2 . 8/18/2013
looks great so far. keep it up.
| Ren-chan Jinguji chapter 2 . 8/18/2013
Aww! Oh Toki and Hayato! You two are too cute together!X3 I love you story! Can't wait until the next chapter!;D
| Hydra no Mago chapter 1 . 8/8/2013
Nice twist! Wasn't really expecting Hayato to be alive and materialized in this world. Just thought he was a fragment of a dream.
I liked how you describe scenery especially, with all your details. You make it sound so alive, as if I'm standing right there in the school garden!
Please update soon! Can't wait to find out what happens next!
| Hope Woods 10 chapter 1 . 7/19/2013
I wasn't sure where you were going, but I am pleasantly surprised at the twist this has taken. I can't wait to see what will happen next. This chapter was amazing, and your visual imagery for the dream was amazing.
Keep writing beautifully.
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/16/2013
Uwah! Awesome! Please update this story when you have the time! It's amazing! *:.｡. o()o .｡.:*
| kousykes chapter 1 . 7/14/2013
Your stories are so great QAQ !
Im gonna wait patiently for next chapters.
Shit I hate patience xD
The end of the first is so beautiful
Im curious how he could forget his twin and why his mummy never told him about her and why they were seperated .
| Ren-chan Jinguji chapter 1 . 7/14/2013
I really like this story...and I hope you make more chapters for this really interesting story...:)