|Reviews for Ghost Stories|
| Adri-Swan chapter 1 . 5/31/2014
Kinda late or I guess early now but Happy bday! Update soon KAY
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/21/2014
| I.am.the.momiji chapter 1 . 2/15/2014
Ha that was a good story please make more
| RpNicole chapter 1 . 10/15/2013
Forgot to tell you something." Phineas" and " Ferb" tied up the butcher man and stuffed him behind the refrigerator so nobody found him. Yeah so his dead corpse ( is that how you spell it?) was behind the fridge. Makes you lose your appetite.
| RpNicole chapter 1 . 10/14/2013
I forgot a detail . The butcher man was tied up and stuffed behind a refrigerator .
| NicoleRp chapter 1 . 10/14/2013
I was dranom speron. Random Person. I think I posted a review on my made-up names but tell me if you got the key to why I said I was dranom speron. I actually read some ghost stories just for this fanfic!
Well once upon a time when some people were building something( Great wall of china) a lot of workers building the thing(wall) went to this restaurant ran by a pudgy little butcher man who was famous for his dumplings. Strangely workers started disappearing. One night 2 workers named( I forgot, I don't care) Phineas and Ferb(don't laugh at my imagination) sneaked down to the restaurant to find something to eat, as they were hungry. So they sneaked in and peeked at the kitchen. The light was on, and the butcher man was chopping weird meat. Then Phineas and Ferb realized something. It was human meat! The butcher man noticed them and attacked them them with his cleavers. (It's not like he didn't have practice) He was eventually defeated by the 2.
"Please, don't turn me in! I'll give you all the food and dumplings you want!"He begged.
"Where's the food?"Ferb asked.
"Right here!" He pointed at the refrigerator.
"We're still turning you in, after tonight, we have to get back to work" Phineas said.
And they scampered back to work and were killed by being squashed by a piece of the wall.
That was in the past...now the present!
"This is a new person investigating this part of the Wall!" an old person introduced( still don't care) Kyo to some other village people.
" Hi!" He greeted the noticed something."Hey what's that empty house there for?"
" Well soon I'm going to turn it into profit!" A business man called Akito (Yup) announced.
So they stayed there for the night. And they had a feast. The old person gave Kyo a bowl of dumplings for desert( weirdos) Well Kyo thought they were weirdos 2 so he left it on his table in his room. In the middle of the night, Kyo woke up and heard a chopping sound coming from the kitchen. He peeked in and saw a butcher man ghost. The ghost saw him and chased him all the way back to Kyo's room and broke the door with his cleavers to get in.
"Aaaagh!"Kyo screamed like the girly little man he is.
Then the ghost saw the dumplings on the table and happily munched on him.
Kyo was not happy. Kyo is stupid. Kyo jumped out the window. Kyo broke his ankle. Kyo dragged himself all the way back to the village and stayed there for the rest of the night as the villagers were as girly as him and wouldn't rush to Akito and the old person's aid.
In the morning both people said they didn't hear anything.
"I'll make money from this!" Akito declared.
So he put the ghost sighting on the news, whatever, and the house was soon full of tourists.
Akito ordered the chef he hired to make lots of dumplings to ward of the ghost, but the chef ran out of meat. " Whatever!" Akito shouted. " Make cheap filling dumplings!"
So cheap one were used.
The next morning the house was empty, the dumplings untouched, the tourists dead, with only Akito's glasses left behind.
That took a long time.
| animeyaoikid chapter 1 . 9/3/2013
Happy late birthday! 07-15-13 is now a holiday!
| mason chapter 1 . 8/31/2013
Mwahahaha. I bet its not your birthday XD so... XD i should go tl bed XD um... meap. Hahahahahahahaha. Sorry XD i think you should continue this, but instead make it super scary and each night, something will happen to each cast member, and last to go is a freaked out tohru, who is trying to look for them, and gers kidnapped, and. Is lead to a basement were everyone is like, APRIL FOOLS! and happy cristmas. Again, really tiered and feeling, jumpy XD i need to go to bed XD bye. Probally wont sleep though..
| asami.clam chapter 1 . 8/31/2013
Oh! I know this story!
Nya! Happy B day!
| Mason chapter 1 . 8/22/2013
Continue this please, AND KYO AND THE HYPNOTIST!
| dranom speron chapter 1 . 8/20/2013
You should know who this is...*creepy voice* okay, it probaly didn't work. Congrats on Birthday!
| wolverrina chapter 1 . 8/19/2013
You totally stuffed up tat horror story, you missed key parts! Like the dog was trained to lick her hand twice if things were ok and once if things weren't ok and she heard the dripping three times and the first two times her dog did twice then the third time it was once so she went down stairs and turned the tap off but there was a note on the fridge in blood saying go outside to the water main and there was her dog strung up dead dripping blood. Normally I love your stuff but this was stuffed up mate.
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/18/2013
wel then tohru is gonna sleep woth a crowbar tonight
| The Canadian Cake chapter 1 . 8/17/2013
This would be an awesome FanFic to continue and you did a great job of putting Momiji's personality in it.
| XxxEmotionalPrincessxxX chapter 1 . 8/16/2013
can you please update:)