Reviews for Betrayl at twilight
jliu1128 chapter 20 . 5/10
I've always hated Bella.
Olivia0707 chapter 1 . 2/5/2016
you continue that is the answer

love it
Guest chapter 7 . 9/27/2015
your a good writer.
Will chapter 1 . 8/28/2015
Do you even know the meaning of the word capitalize? How can you not know something so simple? Do you know how stupid I think you are right now? Do you know how many people have probably ditched this story not because of poor plot or character development but because the author made reading it too irritating to continue.
crazyfanno1 chapter 6 . 8/29/2015
Im risking sounding mean, but in Hp fred died not george.
Sraya chapter 1 . 2/16/2015
I love the Buffy you added hoping the rest is is interestin
Starlightnight34 chapter 4 . 4/3/2014
I just notice that you haven't said anything about how Edward looks like Cedric
angelofheaven001 chapter 20 . 9/12/2013
loved it.
Love Faith Embers chapter 20 . 9/9/2013
Good story.
Mari Wollsch chapter 20 . 9/9/2013
Great, Amazing story, loved it xxxxx
Guest chapter 19 . 9/6/2013
Nice.
Penny is wise chapter 20 . 9/8/2013
Awesome ending to an awesome story. I'm glad you didn't end it with Ivory dead.
hitomi65 chapter 20 . 9/8/2013
Great ending
xXxOtAkU-444xXx chapter 20 . 9/8/2013
I like it! **
harryfansuper chapter 20 . 9/7/2013
This is a much better ending thank you :)
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