|Reviews for Book of Black Pride|
| Haradion chapter 24 . 3/23/2014
This was interesting. Hearing both the history and the present battle is interesting, its easy to see how Renegade was descended from the first pride war. What's interesting, is if it tie s into the current conflict or not.
I am thinking it does somehow.
Any how, nice work. That was a good chapter.
| HomewardDino chapter 23 . 3/10/2014
Nice Chap bro, don't worry about it taking so long, I prefer a story with good quality, My story isn't quite done yet, I'm still approaching the middle part. Nice job on the fight scenes, also like "he" said, don't overuse some words too much. But overall nice History chapter, gives us more insight on what happened and what is going to happen.
| Bookworm Gal chapter 23 . 3/10/2014
A very nice chapter. But I do agree about the the siblings making jokes using their names. It is fairly obvious they picked their names just to mess witht their victims. Great job.
| Haradion chapter 23 . 3/10/2014
Nice work. I liked the fought scenes, and even more like the forward thinking of the lions - if you plan on telling your evil scheme, maim them so that can't tell others... At least they noticed.
However, i have some advice : please, phase, stop using the words "fully prepared". I know it's harder when writing, but when you read the chapters back It's gets a little reparative.
Any way nice work.
| Bookworm Gal chapter 22 . 2/22/2014
More stories from the past. Very nice work. Good luck on the SATs.
| Haradion chapter 22 . 2/22/2014
I think Ahadi is a bit of a fool for getting involved in this, but its good to see the lions thinking through the situation from his perspective. A lesser author would have simply rehashed the Kovu/Kiara romance, with Ahadi being exiled and Uru running after him make amends, but you seem to have your own story going on here...
Still not sure how - or if - it related to the present threat of Hassani. It would be interesting if it did link in somehow...
| TRON0602 chapter 22 . 2/22/2014
Oh man. AHadi you are an idiot who should start telling the truth
| Bookworm Gal chapter 21 . 2/18/2014
Nice job. I feel bad for Kiara and Vitani. Please keep it up.
| TRON0602 chapter 21 . 2/18/2014
Oh man! Your life feels empty? Then fill it with Hakuna Matata
| Haradion chapter 21 . 2/18/2014
That was a very good chapter. Interesting to see how on both sides of the conflict, they are grieving for fallen comrades. I hope that they are still alive...
Any way, keep it up and updated soon.
| Haradion chapter 20 . 2/10/2014
Hey there. To lazy to log in. Awesome chapter. Love Kovu diving in to save Jau. It's very like him, and I enjoyed the insight into Vitani and Kovus mind.
Good chapter. Please update soon.
| Guest chapter 19 . 2/9/2014
Great story and characters can't wait till the next chapter!
| Bookworm Gal chapter 20 . 2/10/2014
And so history repeats as another lion decides they'd rather not accept offered help and fall to their doom. I look forward to more soon. Good luck.
| TRON0602 chapter 20 . 2/9/2014
I say they will survive. Both are too stubborn to die
| Guest chapter 19 . 2/1/2014
awesome! cool story :O