Reviews for Connection
BooksAreMedicine chapter 19 . 5/20
Way to throw in a twist with Pitch. Still I like the ending with Wind, and her Jack like actions
BooksAreMedicine chapter 18 . 5/20
Great interaction between Sandy and Jack :) Sandy does understand Jack the best of everyone except Wind, of course
Nice contrast with their creation too
BooksAreMedicine chapter 17 . 5/20
Haha, of course the guardians don't believe him.
BooksAreMedicine chapter 16 . 5/20
Oh, snow days and fun times :) Just what Jack needed to recover.
BooksAreMedicine chapter 15 . 5/20
Thanks for explaining the Connecting more. I like how Wind convinces him and lets him know how valuable and amazing he is, with his effect on everyone he meets.
BooksAreMedicine chapter 14 . 5/20
Way to go Sandy, glad he stood up for himself and did what he knew was right
BooksAreMedicine chapter 13 . 5/20
Haha, I love how they work together and how she is his first priority
BooksAreMedicine chapter 12 . 5/20
Haha, like the jealousy between Jack's girls :)
BooksAreMedicine chapter 10 . 5/20
Good idea to give her four brothers, I like how she is the most free of them all. A free spirit and the guardian of fun, now that is a good pair :)
I am glad at least Sandy knows and could thank her
BooksAreMedicine chapter 9 . 5/20
I like how you have them being like brothers, it fits so well
BooksAreMedicine chapter 8 . 5/20
It's cool hearing what others think of Jack, how he both worries them and teaches them things.
BooksAreMedicine chapter 7 . 5/20
I do like hearing more about Phil and Jack's games. The cookies were a nice touch
BooksAreMedicine chapter 6 . 5/20
Seriously, how have they not noticed the Wind at this point?
Cool story, great attention to detail and building back stories, well done
BooksAreMedicine chapter 5 . 5/20
Nice job having Sandman notice the wind, he really does see the most of any of them.
I like the capital letters in connected too
BooksAreMedicine chapter 4 . 5/20
Haha, Bunny's line was great.
I like how well Wind and Jack worked together :)
Nice balance with the power and fatigue
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