Nice story so far!

Really good so far, just Remeber to creat a new paragraph for every subject, even if it is a one liner, you don't want a tea t block, those are hard to read. ;)
Other than that, GREAT! I like it a lot, good job. Oh, and I think Robin and Raven should be the couple in this story, just my opinion, but if you don't want that then by all means, make a RaexSpeedy.
Or *hint hint* you could make one of them all jelous or something. Don't care, whatever floats your boat!
Update soon!