There is truly nothing but respect and awe I have for you for creating this great piece of fiction and for your absolutely perfect portrayal of the Strawhats. This is almost certainly my favourite story ever, I've read it at least 5 times and I am still blown away, so I just have to say thank you for making this masterpiece.

Love this.!

Re-reading this fic for the fourth time, now all caught up with One Piece at the moment, and I've gotta say, this and like only three other fics are the only fics that have ever given me such LIFE in this fandom. Gosh darn it. If I could throw stinky perfumed flowers at you like they do for Olympic skaters at the end of their routines, I would. But I have neither stinky perfume flowers or a place to throw them. They'd just slap me back in the face. *Huggles the author* Thank you! XD

Ironic that that's where Sabo was.

Poor Luffy didn't get to see much of zoros reaction though shame I thought his would be the most interesting tnx for the chapter!

By far the best fanfiction on this website! Totally worth the read, it is amazing in so many ways. Just an outstanding plot and great grammar. You know that feeling when you find a fanfic with a great story but horrible writing, or great writing but you can't stand the plot, and then you find it. The fanfic that has both the amazing grammar and even better plot; it's like you hit the jackpot! And that's this story, I read this story over a year ago and I still remember the details and depth of the writing. You are simply an amazing story teller. And I would definitely read this again and again. Keep up the good work, I'll be cheering for you

XD I know this chapter was made WAAAAY before the current arc manga chapter but Sanji gets to see how REAL brothers act instead of the jerks he's unfortunately related to.

Amazing! This has to be my favorite One Piece story ever; this is probably the third or fourth time I've read it. It's so well written and I couldn't stop reading.

I love how despite their intentions not to go in the hole, they all ended up inside. Bless that twig! Lol XD

Great chapter!

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You're using the word "jealous" a lot. However, the Straw Hats would feel more humble than jealous. Like Brook. Honored and humbled by being able to ride the Merry, but never jealous. It doesn't fit them.

Also, time has nothing to do with the quality of relationships. Everyone is part of the crew, and it wouldn't be the same without any of them since everyone has allowed everyone else into their heart. The Straw Hats appreciate what they have, and don't compare as often as you seem to write them doing.

That's the OOC-ness I see.

Honestly though, I wonder what the crew's gonna do about food. They've shown signs of being hungry, but there's nothing to eat in a memory based in a blank room. I hope this point develops...

JINBEI: Boy, you can't see a thing! You're blind! You never doubted your strength, but now, the confidence that once allowed you to soar above the clouds has been shattered! Your brother who was your guiding light has faded away! And your enemy stands so tall and casts so great a shadow, that you can do naught but cower in the darkness! And now, you strike out like an animal at the cage your dad has placed around you!

So long as you are consumed by regret and guilt, you will never find your way forward! Luffy, your pain may be great but it mustn't devour you! There is yet joy beyond your sorrows! What's gone may be gone, but you still have something left in this world to treasure, DON'T YOU?!

ZORO: Hey, you wanna screw around, go do it somewhere else. I'm trying to build muscle here.

NAMI: Luffy! We got a big storm on the horizon! Make preparations quick!

USOPP: I had a big one, you just missed it, but the next one is gonna be even bigger.

SANJI: Scram. I'm almost done. Just keep your pants on.

CHOPPER: It's OK, no matter how bad you're hurt, you're in good hands. By the way, this one might sting a little bit.

ROBIN: Oh, Luffy. If you like treasure, this research is fascinating. Come see.

FRANKY: What's up buddy, if you're checking on the cola engine, it's in super shape. WOW! And if you're checking on me, well, I'm super too.

BROOK: Good morning Captain, rise and shine. How about I play you a little song? Really get those bones moving. Yo ho ho ho ho!

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Great story!