|Reviews for Konoha's Maelstrom|
| flaze chapter 3 . 3/11
kakashi's introspective look into naruto life sucked, he is way too obessed with him. and sarutobi wanted to have a normal childhood for naruto.
| btnerb chapter 6 . 3/8
this is a story I have tried to write ... and your version is hands down better than the draft sitting on my hard drive. You have clearly put a lot of thought into this, and everything actually makes sense. This gives me an unusual amount of confidence that the currently unresolved mysteries will be resolved in a manner both complete and pleasing. Also, the thought out nature makes this fic understandably time consuming to produce, and I am more than willing to wait for extended periods for future chapters.
| lazyguy90 chapter 6 . 3/10
This is one fantastically written and rather well crafted work.
I look forward to the next chapter.
Keep at it.
| acrimony1029341 chapter 6 . 3/9
A brilliant and intelligent story, keep up the good work!
| Badgedbadger chapter 6 . 3/8
I don't intend to creep you out, but for the period of an hour I felt something for you that could somewhat accurately be described as love. Thank you.
| boydarr42 chapter 6 . 3/8
This is one of the best, well-developed, stories on here. With Naruto able to learn a B-ranked Forbidden Jutsu in a few hours he is already a genius Jutsu-wise. Add in Kage Bunshin and his growth rate would increase exponentially, but you are right to not have him even with Rock Lee so soon. Great story please update soon
| Mister Whitey chapter 6 . 3/7
We the people want more of this story
| Xyfa chapter 6 . 3/4
Very interesting so far. I especially like your take on the 3rd's manipulative-but-good outlook.
| artley9 chapter 6 . 3/4
The seal parts are a bit odd, since its not explained in canon. i can see the sealing chamber for tailed beasts, but for low level seals? The theory on how a seal can go wrong would make more sense.
Anyways i agree with your canon views, how the demon brothers were chunnins but the chunnin exams were 10x tougher. I'm glad naruro won't be stuck up on sasuke since its stupid that canon naruto would do anything for him.
its also intriguing that there was no uzumaki references in the academy, and yet no one saw kushina in naruto. Naruto didn't know his clan yet had white swirls on his jacket? And iruka never bothered to review their uniforms ?
I'm sorry but naruto's main character is sasuke in pre shippuden and then a major second role.
| Ressan chapter 6 . 3/3
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| Ressan chapter 3 . 3/3
Nice chapter, tought that meeting and Mito appeareance set for a rather omnious background on the seal (with hidden manipulations since she wants to prevent their meeting), anyway cant wait too see where this leads (while it may not fall in the beatings cliche and others stuff like that, Naruto could still be heavily manipulated, since they are a village of assassins , and he is a potential strategic weapon).
| Silvanatri chapter 6 . 3/2
Brilliant, all i have to say.
| Kythorian chapter 6 . 2/28
This is an absolutely awesome fic. The plot and characters are both really well done so far. I've been especially impressed with some of the insights and explanations into a lot of the characters. There have been quite a few things which were not only very interesting, but actually make a lot of sense for some of the characters and even their canon actions, but which I have never seen before in fanfiction, which is incredibly rare. And you might have spoken disparagingly about your ability to do humor in the first chapter, but this story was really funny. I wouldn't really call it a humor story, exactly, but just scattered throughout were quite a few truly hilarious scenes. You worked them in perfectly so they didn't overwhelm the plot and characters to make things ridiculous as a lot of stories do, and you didn't reuse the same jokes that 90% of fanfiction use over and over again. And most of all it was just really funny. I laughed hard enough I started tearing up a couple of times.
A truly impressive story in all respects. I hope you write more of it soon.