I agree that in the ninja world gender is meaningless when it comes to spars and fights. Just like the “ age gap “ in relationships. In the ninja world age is just a number.

You must be a Harry Potter fan because you made Hiruzen look like Dumbledore. Believe me I am NOT complaining about that at all! Rather I hope that you accept it as a compliment.

Oh boy I have a lot to go over. I’m interested in that you have found a rather unique way of explaining why Naruto is so isolated. Now about how “ canon Naruto didn’t have it that bad?” You need to rewatch the anime. It’s sprinkled here and there but it’s there. Everyone knows about the background of Gaara. Killer Bee also clearly states that his own people tried to kill him. Finally during the Kazekage rescue mission, Kakashi was telling Lady Chiyo that Jinchuuriki are abused in EVERY village. Also the flashbacks of Naruto when he was a child and he had things bounced off his head, he never had money for food and there was an arc about some students who tried to kill Naruto. Rewatch the anime. Prove me wrong.

Amazing story. Wish you updated this gem

Love this fic so much and despite it being 10 years I hope you update again in the future.

This looks great, can't wait to read more️

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I love the story and I hope you update soon, and do you think you can up on the cat thing and make him go out on that

Aaahhhhggg I love this so much! The fact that it is abandoned is a genuine tragedy

Nonononononononononono pleeeeeeeaaaassseee this was so good

My god my god these are smart moves of great quality. Like the rampage of a nine-brained fox in dispersing the darkness or a test in the spreading waves. And the humor was also on point, but basically all the coolness was in Naruto's savvy.

Sasuke using this type of hand-to-hand combat is not an idiotic act, but the only one possible. There is no reason for Sasuke to learn any other type of hand-to-hand combat, since he is going to develop Sharingan in the future and switch to a fighting style specialized in Sharingan. Learn basic hand-to-hand combat It would just be a waste of time.

Perhaps it was worth making Naruto cry after hitting his face in the dirt and venting his rage. It would make him more like the child he is.

Huh the plants thing could be a foreshadowing for mokuton

I love this sooo much. Incredibly sad that the last update was 2014 (nearly 9 years ago, makes you feel old, I know) Would love to see more but will have to settle with dreaming up the rest for now :)

Great read, thanks! I like the memory transfer stuff, it actually makes sense that its possible, sadly. Honestly i think the clone memory stuff is actually just too broken if you try to write a smart/reasonable story with it haha

Pretty much agree. I dislike how over their heads they are in Wave, esp since we dont see kakashi actually training them at all in canon, so its a weird part where you have to show that they are exceptionally talented, but the brothers should be able to do something