Wish i could edit reviews, but should've realized before posting last chapter since you mentioned kakashi didnt know everything.
Anyway, i really like how you've "filled in" plot holes rather than just ignored them or changed them, and your solutions seem very reasonable. Im excited to read the rest of what you've written

Im reviewing mid chapter to say i never even considered that the memory-transfer aspect of kage bunshin was optional, and that narutos pre-conceived belief that memories wouldnt transfer would make it so! Very cool

I really like your thoughts and even changes to what happens in canon, such as why naruto is left alone, the spinny shuriken thing, and of course the random abuse (it was interesting the first few times i read a fic with it, less so after haha).
I tend to be more inclined to want to just change things completely, but i like the rationale behind your comments

Quite a good story. I hope this continues.

This is a really really really good fic.
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But you haven't updated it in so very long...

You should definitely post the rest of it or if the fic is abandoned, at least the notes on how it ends, please?... It's a pretty good fic.

love this and wish there was more it's amazing

Esta historia fue sencillamente épica, que lastima que sea muy corta y este abandonada, si escribiera historias sin duda me hubiera gustado adoptarla pero tristemente no escribo.

Me gustó que cuidarse tantos detalles y cabos sueltos que en otras circunstancias ni la vista le dan algunos autores y ni se diga del autor original de la obra.

Muy buena.

To future readers, the author has a tendency to ramble on forever going absolutely nowhere. His characterization of Naruto is extremely goofy and I feel the author himself got sidetracked a lot. He follows cannon, so the story is pretty generic. The theory is fun to read and the way he expands jutsu creation is good but that's about it.

Awesome

Please please keep going with this story! It’s amazing!

Love it thus far wish there was more

baaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad, why the fuck are all these fics so fricking shitty

What is this story? I feel like this is more a fan made info dump of Naruto than a story, and when you get to the story you throw stuff around. Like you said that he found his mindscape while waiting for Kakashi, then he says something about Kakashi’s personality despite never having met him before, or having only met him once? Maybe just try making the story more to the point than just exposition and info dumping? It would really help the story.

I'd love to see how this continues.
Will you ever pick this one back up and add more chapters?

What was the point of making the story?