I'm sad that this story seems to have been abandoned. It was going in such an interesting direction. If you ever get back to it, I'll definitely keep reading. Hopefully you're safe and healthy in this strange world we now live in and can actually do that someday.

TenTen’s adorable

This is an amazing story as far as fanfiction goes. Sad to see it abandoned, but I hope you'll let a skilled writer adopt it.

This fic is great, better than most of what I've seen while searching the top favorited fics in this fandom. Great grammer, pacing, storyline, and especially great characterization, except maybe on Sakura's part (but few enough people like her, anyways). Sakura seems entirely insensitive to the fact that Naruto is a person as well, and I really don't much like your version of the character much because of it, but it could be easily fixed, I think, by a few scenes from Sakura's perspective, showcasing the why of her dislike for Naruto, and maybe her cognitive dissonances now that Naruto is starting to change for the better.
Though it seems like you've abandoned this fanfic, if you happen to see this comment please take my advice under consideration. It really is a great work of writing, regardless of any flaws.

The little twist with Mito was fucking dumb. Slowly starting to see why this was abandoned.

hi rlly enjoyed this book, know that its been awhile, but plz update!

Good but you do give a lot of information that is side knowledge or not really part of the story. That drags the story out more than you need to. Still good just cut down the side information

This is a good story. I enjoyed Zabuza's internal panic on realizing Naruto's relation to the 4th Hokage. I love the way you've portrayed the characters through the story, even if you have been torturing poor Kakashi a bit XD
Keep up the great work!

really you need to chill the fuck out and start writing the story instead of useless exposition that will never ever matter for the reader, just stfu and go on with the story like wtf

I love the approach to chakra theory and its applications in narutoverse. thank you for the story!

HEYO! I don't know if you still read these, or even if you are still active, in any case, I'll just throw this in here, I'd like to adopt this story, or at least it's premise, would you be fine with that? Please let me know, if you read this.

This is quite simply an amazing story even with how short it is.

Well written, wish I could have seen more seals.

Bitch mito what did the kyuubi do to piss you off plus how tf is Mito even existing anyway?