interesting fic

haha funny I like it

Solid Henge is a normal Henge. It is Ninjitsu and not Genjutsu as a non-solid would be.

Will naruto evolve his kage bunshin so instead of being clones they become chakra constructs like kushinas chain and other weapons? And since they arnt clones and sentient they have a lot more resiliance.

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I enjoy this story and I'm looking forward to what comes next!

This story is amazing, it has interesting ideas, good plot (so far... all 10 minutes of it xD) and good grammar.
The romance bit is a thing that I'm worrying about. From what I read you like NaruHina a lot... to tell the truth, I've read so much NaruHina that I could puke if I only read er stuttering. So I would like to request various things and be thankful if you listen to them ;p So I really dislike harems or the version of super unrealistic story destroying inconsequental Meag Harem and wanted to ask you if you intend to make one... if yes than please tell me, because I dont want to get attached to a story that I need to drop. About other pairing, most appreciated by me would be leaving pairing alone for age 16 or higher, because I find it unrealistic having 12 year olds having some hot throat licking action... wait thats not toooo unrealistic, but you probably know what I mean. But if you absolutly must, then PLEASE dont take the following pairing, NaruIno,Hina,Saku. They're done so ofter and executed so poorly that I often just skip them and miss out on some plot points.

Now onto the theorie:
I absolutely love what you're doing, one of the most interesting things about Naruto are the chakra theories or the inner workings of Jutsu. Why use the same 15 jutsu through out the whole 700 episodes of Naruto, why not make a new one that nobody knows to suprise the opponent. Please dont thing that there is something akin to too much theory, I want to hear so much info of anything about chakra or jutsus, so that I feel the need to bash my head into the wall and shortly after yours (hilarious line btw). It's really interesting and jutsu crafting is one thing that is donr so little.

Onto the humour:
Your story has enough humour, personally you could have no humopur at all, I'm fine with that, but I find myself getting headaches if I read a long chapter and dont have some time to relax whilst getting off a few laughs.

There are so much things I could write, but for now this shall be enough, just know that you would make me a REALLY sad Panda if you just stop updating.
Thanks for uploading this so far awesome fic and I'm waiting for the next chaper...s.
(•3•) Puhhh

Yay! I love seeing actual jutsu theory in stories... I didn't find it boring or tedious at all! I think you did very well getting the theory across without it becoming confusing. Good job with the grammar too... I've read too many poorly written stories today X'D

Anyway, I just wanted to say that I agree with you on the affinities bit. Kakashi has the sharingan... but regardless he's still able to use jutsu from nearly all of the elements.. I think wind is the only one he can't use, though fire is anime only apparently. And there are many, many characters with two elements they are able to use.. so I'm glad the book is going to cover elemental affinities in such a way.

Looking forward to reading more!

Interesting start - although your interpretation of canon is different from mine in several places, I enjoy reading alternate perspectives, which is sort of the point of fanfiction after all ;)

Your grammar and spelling seem solid, although I don't often see footnotes here (I'll get used to it if you keep writing and there's nothing wrong with it, certainly better than putting AN's in the text).

I haven't read Soulblazer's fic that I can recall, so I can't comment on any similarities, though I might check it out if it inspired you to write this. I look forward to seeing where you go from here, thanks for taking the time to entertain with your imagination :)

well , the premise is interesting..
waiting to see how you proceed...
anyway, all the best .

hn as long as there is no bashing or Hinata/harems involved

I feel pretty awesome seeing someone write a fic that is even a bit inspired by my own.

Don't worry about not 'doing it exactly like me', because that's not the point. You're doing great just the way you are, and that is something you should be proud of. So many people try to copy others to the point where they lose their originality -here's to hoping you avoid that pit-fall.

I'm very interested in seeing what you develop this story into.

As an advice that I spent a lot of time getting myself, to avoid 'overcomplicating things', and thus avoid plot holes; start simple and build your way up. It's simpler that you might think, but harder than it sounds. In simple terms; it's like building a house. First you do the groundwork, then the walls, then the roof. Start by making a simple 'outline' of things and then add details and twists only to the point YOU are comfortable in.

Anyway, loved the first chapter, no grammar/syntax/spelling mistakes I could see, solid story background so far, here's to being the best :D

Love this first chapter :))
I'm surprised you don't have more reviews at this point but perhaps other people don't adore good fics where Naruto finally actually takes advantage of what could be a game changing technique.
A Drop Of Poison is one of my very favorite fics, although Naruto uses kage bunshin in a different way in that story. But I'm greatly looking forward to seeing how he uses it in your story!
Update soon! I'm desperate for a good fic after reading so many shitty ones lately and yours seems to have promise. Of course I would be your best friend if you kept it gen fic or at the very least didn't have Naruto suddenly falling madly in love with someone at age twelve, but I won't hold it against you if you throw in a pairing.

Is there a pairing?