|Reviews for this is how we collapse|
| Princess Unikitty chapter 1 . 9/29/2013
interesting one-sht. i like how you characterized amy.
| AnimagiPotter chapter 1 . 9/1/2013
im slightly confused, but ah well, I like the plot and im sorry for not noticing the AN but since is hasnt been changed for two months or anything I concluded my review would be unacknowledged, I like fics with both Amy and Clara, so :) good job and all, and chu should write more!
| squeakyswings chapter 1 . 8/10/2013
Oh, Hope. Hope Hope Hope Hope.
This is really just - ahhh. I love how this develops. I love how you take that whole tangle of a storyline and stretch it out so nicely (not neatly, because anything with that many timelines and alternatives could never be neat, but you explain it and describe it beautifully). I love the ways Clara and the Doctor interact here, and how Amy and Clara interact, and how true to the series this is in so many ways. ALso, the writing is, as always, utterly flawless.
| lydiamaartin chapter 1 . 7/25/2013
IM NOT ENTIRELY SURE WHEN 5AM HAPPENED BUT I HOPE MY REVIEW IS COHERENT ENOUGH ANYWAY
okaY so we all know i love your writing right? we also know that i love eleven/clara and eleven/amy (sos i found out another one of my friends hates eleven/amy i'm just like ... why does this keep happening to me ...) so obVIOUSLY i adored this fic like whoa i mean even though it was non-linear and pretty confusing i thought it worked really well mostly because the show is also very confusing so it really wasn't much different from watching the show except it was a lot better written than anything moffat could pull off lol
CLARA oh god your clara i want to bring her home and wrap her in a blanket fort and feed her hot chocolate oh man there are hearts in my eyes because you just wrote her so brilliantly and perfectly and she was so sweet and strong and wonderful and loyal and caring and ok so i still haven't watched most of her season lmao bUT I DO LOVE HER ANYWAY AND I LOVED HER DOUBLY SO IN YOUR FIC you just got all her nuances, how devoted and brave she is, how she challenges the doctor ("Besides, if it didn't really happen and it's all in my head, then how do you know what I'm thinking? Maybe you just think that I thought it. Maybe that's what this is." GOD BLESS THAT'S MY GIRL), how she is tired and sad but she still keeps going because she loves the doctor so much agklsgfds
also eleven and amy were both kind of background characters to clara's story here but i just wanna say how much i loved all the mentions of their relationship because i think you got it exactly on point, just how /much/ they loved each other and especially how much the doctor loved her and how they were literal soulmates and how clara recognized that, like i feel that all those people who "brotp" eleven and amy just kind of miss the strength of their relationship like all they see are the jokes and the casual dynamic they fall into but they totally miss how utterly dedicated eleven and amy are to each other, especially eleven to amy, and just how important they are in each other's lives and you obviously do get that and it came across so well and again i love how clara got that too
ALTHOUGH I'M NOT GONNA LIE i found myself shipping eleven/clara more than eleven/amy in this fic? i think it was mostly because i felt so sad for clara my little princess i just want her to be happy siiiigh
amazing job, as always, i love you, aND I AM SO BEYOND EXCITED FOR YOUR 30TH FIC as if you didn't know that already ahahaha KEEP WRITING BECAUSE I WILL NEVER STOP LOVING YOUR WRITITNG
| NeverBeLonely chapter 1 . 7/18/2013
Wow, this is really good, very complex, but still very good. :D Xx
| kinzeylee chapter 1 . 7/18/2013
I really like this story, even though I'm not quite sure what just happened. Did Clara die for real? Is Amy saved? Maybe you could explain to me a little bit? Anyway, i was really intrigued by this story! Very nice.
| Incendia Glacies chapter 1 . 7/15/2013
very interesting concept...i'll admit i'm not an eleven/amy fan, but i love eleven/clara...this was mind boggling? but in a good way!