|Reviews for The Crumbling Stage|
| Verno SSS chapter 4 . 10/9/2017
And he was never see again
| airistal chapter 4 . 9/6/2017
no update in over 3 years that's sad.
| airistal chapter 1 . 9/6/2017
Simple pluging of plot holes finds you this gem. Good so far.
| faust79 chapter 4 . 7/30/2017
i like the story hopefully you will update soon
| Guest chapter 4 . 5/12/2017
Good story ! I hope that you dont abandon it
| Judgment of the Arbiter chapter 4 . 3/23/2016
| hillerjk1991 chapter 4 . 6/21/2015
I really hope that you continue this story. It's got a lot of promise and I'd really like to see where you go with it.
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/14/2015
I love your story so far! The characters in this story are so much better than the one in the original Fate series. I unfortunately watched Fate Zero before Fate Stay Night, and when Shirou was introduced at the end of Zero, I expected him to be just like his awesome father. Unfortunately, he wasn't. This totally made up for that. Can you make Luvia the love interest for Shirou in your series? It would make your fic even more different (in a good way).
| Guest chapter 4 . 11/12/2014
| askasknot chapter 4 . 11/10/2014
I love this story and I hope to see more soon.
I can easily see this story becoming one of the better fanfiction out there
the only thing you need is more chapters and more love from your readers ;D
since you need a cover image I can produce one for you
just contact me using pm so we can discuss what you want
You can see what I can do if you search for askasknot on deviantart
so hopefully I'll hear from you soon :)
| Amortal chapter 4 . 10/27/2014
This needs more chapters, yes it does because I need more! The reason? Well for one its rather well written and amusing to boot so do update soon please.
| blarg7865 chapter 4 . 7/27/2014
Will you reveal if Shirou still has to deal with the wraith if the Taiga?
Also, will Shirou gain any noble phantasms for tracing before the grail war?
| DarkPirateKing69 chapter 4 . 5/30/2014
so.. is Shirou was faking that earlier personality as mask to survive einzbern or are they holding Ilya's well being over his head.. or was that part of his own personality that was just developed over the years?
| Paragon Steven chapter 4 . 5/12/2014
can't wait for the next chapter! UPDATE SOON!
| Paragon Steven chapter 3 . 5/12/2014
AMAZING! update soon please!