Shit no likey at all

Update soon

And here I though It was another chapter update..
Please update this fic

gin would be a good recruit along kuro as long as Naruto's him under control ive seen some good stories with him joining the strawhats.

Cool 2 chapters continue please.

not exactly a new concept, and the thing seemed to be hashed out.

If you're looking for empty praise, this isn't it.

My tips:

Make it hell of a lot longer. This is the concept chapter, a rough outline, so to speak. The grammar, the dialogue, and the chapter itself isn't up to snuff to be considered a decent piece.

Even if the idea is reused, try and make it unique. Deaths by offscreen poison is pretty weak. At least break scene and flesh out the death scene, even if you have to put in "Nameless person" or "shadowy assassin" to not giveaway the perpetrator in Naruto's parent's deaths.

Anyways, thats all I've got for this thing.

Terra Ace

i like this keep up the great work and update soon

Love this story...
Please update soon..

I think it's cool

Epic chapter please keep it up!

Ok one add a little more detail not just a swear vengence thing make a plot out of it and make your chapters longer