Reviews for The Devil Pirates
Guest chapter 2 . 1/27/2020
Shit no likey at all
hansgyver62 chapter 2 . 11/16/2016
Update soon
Shiki Ouji sama chapter 3 . 3/12/2014
And here I though It was another chapter update..
Please update this fic
Lightningblade49 chapter 2 . 11/18/2013
gin would be a good recruit along kuro as long as Naruto's him under control ive seen some good stories with him joining the strawhats.
StrongGuy159 chapter 2 . 10/8/2013
Cool 2 chapters continue please.
Terra ace chapter 1 . 9/14/2013
not exactly a new concept, and the thing seemed to be hashed out.

If you're looking for empty praise, this isn't it.

My tips:

Make it hell of a lot longer. This is the concept chapter, a rough outline, so to speak. The grammar, the dialogue, and the chapter itself isn't up to snuff to be considered a decent piece.

Even if the idea is reused, try and make it unique. Deaths by offscreen poison is pretty weak. At least break scene and flesh out the death scene, even if you have to put in "Nameless person" or "shadowy assassin" to not giveaway the perpetrator in Naruto's parent's deaths.

Anyways, thats all I've got for this thing.

Terra Ace
herbert89 chapter 2 . 9/7/2013
i like this keep up the great work and update soon
Shiki Ouji sama chapter 2 . 9/7/2013
Love this story...
Please update soon..
Guest chapter 2 . 9/7/2013
I think it's cool
kevinplr2h chapter 1 . 8/6/2013
Epic chapter please keep it up!
HeLlHoUnD555 chapter 1 . 7/16/2013
Ok one add a little more detail not just a swear vengence thing make a plot out of it and make your chapters longer