Reviews for The Black Dragon Slayer
jcampbellohten chapter 7 . 9/29/2015
I... don't get how an army of humans, even spiritually aware humans, (which are supposed to be incredibly rare, by the way, whereas you make it sound like 20% of the world's population are so) could go to war with [italics]the afterlife[/italics].
jcampbellohten chapter 4 . 9/28/2015
Chapter 3 needs a lot of proofreading. This chapter needs less, but still some. For example:
"...by extension Cana, Mirajane, and Cana." You named Cana twice. Also, it's not clear what you mean about an age gap. Are you saying there's a wider gap in ages between Natsu/Gray/Lisanna/Lucy and Erza/Cana/Mirajane/Laxus? (I think Cana's closer to Natsu and Gray's age than to Erza's, actually, assuming Erza's older than them.)
"If someone gets hurt, he goes after them nad beats them up." First: the "and" typo. Second: he beats up the person who got hurt? What?
"...Ichigo won't definitely a prude by the..." In context I think I know what you meant, but this makes no sense.
grey sigma chapter 2 . 9/16/2015
this story rules...cant wait for the next update...
monkiepawn chapter 8 . 9/10/2015
Love your Acnologia character.
No development but nice interaction in this chapter.
Mephistonthelordofdeath chapter 8 . 9/3/2015
acnologia wants ichigo's meat
Guest chapter 8 . 8/31/2015
Please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update THIS, and your OTHER stories, again SOON! Thank you!
Clouffie1986 chapter 8 . 8/25/2015
This story is awesome. I can't wait to see more.
lucifer.94 chapter 8 . 8/18/2015
finally, an update...
you make us wait too long sometimes with your updates man...
:P
that said, great chapter as always...

btw, i think u did a bit mixup at the end...

coz in the last scene, you mentioned ichigo and acnologia entering the inn together, with acnologia heading off to their room
then in the last line, you mentioned her entering the inn just as ichigo left for his room
a small mixup, no?
:P

anyways, cant wait for the next chapter...
update soon...
JensenDaniels32 chapter 2 . 8/18/2015
...I...JUST KNOW THAT I AM GOING TO LOVE THIS! :D
JensenDaniels32 chapter 1 . 8/18/2015
HELL YES!
Firedragon.ed chapter 8 . 8/18/2015
Ichigo, be a man and buy lady her meat! *Isshin swells with pride*
norris321 chapter 8 . 8/17/2015
Very enjoyable chapter.
Telron chapter 8 . 8/17/2015
lol good chapter and poor Makarov
Shiro crimson chapter 8 . 8/17/2015
aww the chapter is too short, hope you update soon!
Serithus chapter 8 . 8/17/2015
Ichigos going to give her his meat ;)
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