Reviews for Precursor
James Birdsong chapter 1 . 8/19/2014
*shivers in dread* Nice story.
GAT-X105VividPanzer chapter 1 . 11/9/2013
Wow, that was awesome! I loved your story. Very Tragic.
Transcendent Being Fan chapter 1 . 8/10/2013
Your ideas are interesting and well written, but the story is so depressing, you made the combination of two dark/pseudo grimdark universes more depressing than the originals.
Casandraelf chapter 1 . 8/2/2013
This is short, but it's also fucking BRILLIANT! I like to think that her wish led to the Precursors finally getting everything together to attack our world. Big question is, did she turn into a Witch or did Madokami save her?
Batta the Beast chapter 1 . 7/25/2013
Done already? I am disappoint that this magical girl didn't try to fight Trespasser :(
enderverse chapter 1 . 7/25/2013
This is great, but now I'm picturing Homura pulling a Jaeger out of her pocket to fight Walpurgisnacht.
JenEvan chapter 1 . 7/23/2013
A tragedy nicely depicted... and who would have guess the initial thought was just harmless... Nice.
Slayer Anderson chapter 1 . 7/18/2013
...claps slowly.

I think you actually managed to make the Madoka-verse more depressing than it already was.
Bravo good sir.
Erin Primette chapter 1 . 7/17/2013
Wait minute, the Kaiju invasion was all Kyubey's doing?
Princess Unikitty chapter 1 . 7/16/2013
interesting premise, but very well executed nonetheless.