Reviews for The Sinister Schism
richards25 chapter 13 . 7/26/2013
This was so good! I loved this! I cannot wait for the next instalment!:D
Coral Tawnies chapter 12 . 7/25/2013
writinginpen chapter 2 . 7/25/2013
Might I say that your writing has improved. I mean, you write in Lemony Snicket Style so well. I'm truly enjoying it. It feels as if I'm rereading the series. Well, might I say that I'm eager to read on and see what happen to the unfortunate Baudelaire siblings. I imagine the worst is yet to come.

Amazing Chapter Bro :)
richards25 chapter 12 . 7/25/2013
This was good! I am glad you used the grappling hook! :D I want to know what happens haha!
Princess Unikitty chapter 12 . 7/25/2013
another well-written chapter!
Coral Tawnies chapter 11 . 7/24/2013
Hmmmm... A great chapter! It got me wondering if the bearded man was the man with the beard but no hair. Can you have a chapter from Sunny's point of view?
richards25 chapter 11 . 7/24/2013
Oh how exciting! I now want to know where this Bladeridge Castle is! And yay, their mum isn't dead, nor is Sunny! And nice ending, you have always been good a cliffhangers :P
Princess Unikitty chapter 11 . 7/24/2013
another well-written chapter. love how detailed everything is.
Coral Tawnies chapter 10 . 7/23/2013
Nice! The only thing is, you forgot to have Violet tie her hair up when she invented the welding torch.
Guest chapter 10 . 7/23/2013
Really great story! Keep it up :D
Don't Leave me Hanging chapter 10 . 7/23/2013
I like the sweet relationship between Violet and Arlo :) criticism? You do everything almost perfect, I cannot think of any! Uh...Maybe introduce other Snicket characters? :p
Princess Unikitty chapter 10 . 7/23/2013
another well-written chapter. keep it up
richards25 chapter 10 . 7/23/2013
Oh no! Klaus! I really look forward to what you have planned! :D
Coral Tawnies chapter 9 . 7/22/2013
The anticipation, it's unbearable! I'd give you constructive criticism, but I can't think of any.
richards25 chapter 9 . 7/22/2013
Woah no way! This is so exciting! I cannot wait to see what will happen! Great writing :D
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