Reviews for The Sinister Schism
richards25 chapter 2 . 7/18/2013
Another great one! :D Took me a second to realise there are 3 chapter! Ooh, the notebooks! Wonderful choice! I am so looking forward to where this goes!
richards25 chapter 1 . 7/18/2013
Very good start! I am enjoying already! You do capture the wit required to do the Snicket-styled narrative, which is impressive, although I understand it will be difficult to uphold. I don't mind either option. But yes, very good start! I cant wait to see how you portray their parents :D
Princess Unikitty chapter 3 . 7/18/2013
another well-written chapter. love how cool you've made the baudelaire parents out to be.
Coral Tawnies chapter 1 . 7/18/2013
I loved this. I think the Snicket style is fine. You need to carry on writing. No seriously, I'll die if you don't.
Princess Unikitty chapter 2 . 7/17/2013
another well-written chapter. you definitely a thing or two about writing like snicket. keep it up.

no need for a hyphen here
Princess Unikitty chapter 1 . 7/16/2013
looks great so far. i think you should continue writing like snicket!
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