|Reviews for Things that start with M|
| marriah.ferguson.1 chapter 49 . 4/1/2018
This was a beautiful fanfiction, one of the best I've ever read. It's amazingly written and I love how you portrayed the characters. I love the way you wrote this, the misfits are hilarious and always fun to read about. I also like how you had them make Sherlock think John was M, it was genius. This fanfiction is really a work of art.
| Helena Wells chapter 48 . 6/27/2017
This is sooo adorable. Where has this been all my life? Nevermind, I'd like you to know that I read this instead of work and am now dreadfully behind on my Assignments. Good job.
| Guest chapter 49 . 1/23/2017
Really loved this story! The beginning was great when John and Moriarty met at Sherlock grave and how their complicated relstionship developed from there and it was nice that you didn't try and make excuses for Moriarty and didn't forget that he could be horrible and cruel and dangerous. The ending was way sappier then I was expecting but I can get behind the pairing of John/Moriarty and them getting to actually live a relatively normal life. Thanks for sharing! :)
| Lolzisme chapter 49 . 1/14/2017
Beautiful, came back to this site just to favourite this beautiful thing. Nearly (aka did) started crying at the end x
| Mari Wollsch chapter 34 . 11/28/2016
i read this story a ffew years ago and this chapter stook whit me so much, i love it xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
| Lavonya chapter 49 . 9/30/2016
There aren't any words that can describe how much I love this...
You are an AMAZING writer!
It took me about six maybe seven hours to read this... I was just about to go to bed when I found this... I lost track of time and could NOT stop reading... this was SO worth missing a night of sleep over!
The ending was PERFECT!
| Lavonya chapter 14 . 9/30/2016
Haaaaaahaaaaaaahaaaaaaa... I LOVE THIS SO DAMN MUCH!
The las part... oh wow... heeeeeeheeeeeheeeeeeheeeeee... loved it!
| Jenna Costanzo chapter 49 . 1/10/2016
This was brilliant, amazing, wonderful, perfect! Ugh. You know when you finish a tv series or a book and feel as if your life is now over because that's how I feel right now. NOW WHAT DO I DO? Haha. Anyways, I loved this story and I love you for making it. God, I'm going to miss this. 3 And Sherlock, thanks for giving him a happy ending. He deserves it.
| Cherielynn chapter 10 . 7/15/2015
I just wanted to let you know how much I've been enjoying your work. I've just finished cpt 10 and I really like this version of John. Really excellent interior monologue and your dialogue is very realistic and believable. Thanks so much for posting and I can't want to see what else you write. You'll always have a constant reader in me.
| Mari Wollsch chapter 49 . 5/1/2015
great, super! xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
| greenwings33 chapter 49 . 4/6/2015
This is a fabulous piece is writitng - everyone is in character, John actually has moral dilemmas and such before he switches sides. Sherlock is still Sherlock and you have made Moriarty beautiful. Instead of so many other writers who cannot grasp the essence of their characters, you have captured them and made them bigger and better. This is gorgeous.
| Millenium Ring chapter 15 . 1/19/2015
Hey just a quick little note about something I picked up on this chapter, before I finish reading a truly enjoyable and different - in a good way - story. Part way in this chapter, you'd written that John would babysit in his teens and earn four 'dollars', but it would have been 'pounds'. You're most likely not from Great Britain, so I can forgive that mistake. I haven't picked up anything else yet to deeply offend me like some authors do (I've seen entire stories where the author has used terrible stereotypes of English people, or else used waaaay too many American-isms, to the point that it is unrecognisable as a Sherlock story. I'm English, so that always upsets me.) I'm super psyched to get through the rest of this brillo fic though :D.
| AgentNerd chapter 41 . 12/30/2014
How do I love this? Let me count the ways.
1) Moriarty interacting with children. It can only go either one of two ways: either he despises them, or he loves them. You chose the latter route, and it's definitely the more interesting one.
2) Showing Moriarty's human side, but still keeping him clearly evil. I was as conflicted as John was throughout the whole thing. "He's a horrible person—but he just washed the dishes!" You made him so much more complex and interesting, and it was so much fun to read—conflicting fun, but still fun.
3) John. You portrayed him perfectly. I loved the analysis and detail, his thought processes helped make every decision and action that much more believable.
4) Your writing style is fantastic. Wonderfully detailed and descriptive without becoming tedious. I have trouble with writing imagery, myself, but you have some real gems in those chapters.
5) Your decision to leave it up to the readers on whether or not they wanted JimmyJohns. I don't ship it, so I enjoyed the first 41 chapters immensely and I'm completely satisfied. But I think that's a very unique thing, to offer it both ways. Everyone is happy!
| DracyGiuliana chapter 49 . 10/22/2014
There are so many things that I want to say but I find myself quite.. speechless here, at the end. A good speechless. I mean.. wow. This was beyond beautiful. This whole thing captivated me so thoroughly, it made me drop EVERYTHING for two days. There was so much I should probably have done but I just didn't care because nothing mattered anymore except this story. And that's amazing. I don't regret a thing. I would list everything that I love about this story, from the Alice parallels to the Misfits to John's and Jim's growing relationship but it would just become a text monster of ramblings and I would forget hundreds of things and then I'd be upset. So I'll just say I love everything about this, which, literally, I do. This story is amazing beyond belief and I'm grateful I had the opportunity to read it. Thank you!
| Mirage chapter 46 . 10/20/2014
the end of chap 46 was really sad somehow