|Reviews for On your door step|
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/6/2016
Good, but the time line doesn't make sense, how could Frodo be a child when the story takes place if Bilbo and Thorin hadn't seen each there in 20 years.
| KyuuNaru4ever chapter 1 . 9/30/2016
That was so adorable! I giggled when it saidI can be your husband and father", I knew what you ment! I loved it!
| TheWrither'sNote chapter 1 . 9/14/2015
Urhhh, how sweet! Great work, I looooved to read it u
| caligo-lux chapter 1 . 8/24/2015
lol...it would be sweet if I weren't so amused by thorin saying "I can be your father"...i know you meant "I can be the father of our child" but I still had to giggle like mad at iit XD
| samanthatm chapter 1 . 2/10/2015
| moonlightkiss1515 chapter 1 . 12/13/2014
Never too late!
| Aoife Miranda chapter 1 . 11/18/2014
Good, but please invest in a beta reader! It would make your story so much better! Plus, it would look more polished and be much easier to read.
I did think it was interesting that Smaug knew Bilbo was pregnant, though. That was a pretty cool twist in the whole "Thorin gets Bilbo pregnant" trope.
| Hufflepuffle97 chapter 1 . 8/15/2014
That was the cutest thing and I'm gonna cry :')
| kirallie chapter 1 . 6/5/2014
They thought Bilbo was dead? Ouch. More please?
| dragon-en chapter 1 . 2/10/2014
| janet1982 chapter 1 . 12/11/2013
not bad, would like to read more,please update)
| Fan chapter 1 . 8/12/2013
Awwwwww baby Frodo is just to cute! Mama say yes my favorite line
| Balin of Moria chapter 1 . 7/22/2013
Absolutely adorable! :)
The only thing that bothered me was Frodo calling Bilbo "Mama." In my head, I mentally substituted it. :)
| vampygurl402 chapter 1 . 7/18/2013
| Anime Princess chapter 1 . 7/18/2013
Well, Frodo does seem to have Thorin's eyes, doesn't he? Love it!