And the part where Arogorn, Legolas and Gimli were not able to tell Arwen about how the elf and dwarf became friends was one of the parts I loved the most. And also the part were Gimli convincing shandarell using fluent sindarin while Faramir and Arogorn watches was also very endearing:)

gripping story

Legolas is a great actor, I see! Lol! And if Gimli ever found out about that, I doubt he'd ever let him forget it, but of course, he'd be too grateful to have him back to tease him at first.

Not the baby!

Oh my gosh! Noooo! The baby!

I love it! Although I am curious about what happened to Tervanis? Will you write a story about him?

I LOVED this chapter

Oh no! Poor Gimli and Legolas...

Hi,
I have just read your wonderful story and felt I had to let you know how much I enjoyed it!
It surprised me at how realistic and violent it was and no doubt like everyone else, I was horrified at the assault on Arwen and the loss of her baby!
I realise you wrote this ages ago and probably will not even read this, but just had to say how much I enjoyed it and will look out for more of your stories, particularly the sequel to this one, if you ever got around to writing it!

Littlefish,
This fanfiction was a real joy to read! There was a depth to it that really drew me into the storyline. The death of Aragorn and Arwen's child was tragic and added some weight to the story; this wasn't going to be one of those fanfics where nothing was lost through the ordeal and afterwards, everything could go back to how it was before. It felt like a statement that you're not afraid to kill characters off, so we'd better be prepared.
The relationships between the characters were handed superbly; I really felt the strength of the bonds between them; and not just those of Gimli, Aragorn, and Legolas, but also those of Arwen, Faramir, Eowyn, and the rest of the cast.
Though your love for LoTR seems to have moved to Supernatural, I do hope to see the promised sequel from you eventually. Tervanis was an extremely interesting character- one you can't help but to root for despite his misdeeds. The promise of another beautiful duel between the two made me very happy indeed. I also found myself just as surprised as the true identity of the villain was revealed; he had seemed like such a harmless fool before!
I've noticed that you tend to end your writings rather abruptly. Though you always reach a point that readers have a vague feeling of conclusion, but never go farther. This isn't necessarily bad, but perhaps another chapter dealing with the after-effects of the whole affair could bring about a better sense of conclusion.

Thank you for your efforts! I'll keep an eye out for your sequel!

This is an absolutely brilliant story! Just finished reading it and I already can't wait for a sequel. The promise of a fight between Legolas and Tervanis is really exciting and I look forward to see how Gimli and Aragorn react. Anyway, you are an amazing writer. Keep up the great work!

Wow! Again, this was a terrific story! Also, when will you release the sequel to this story? I know that you probably don't have enough time to really go onto FanFiction much anymore, but I really, really, really, REALLY want to see a sequel! So, pretty please, with cherries on top, release a sequel? Please, please, please, please, PLEASE! I am really eager to see Legolas and Tervanis face off again in a fair fight! Keep up the terrific work, and I will be sure to stay in touch!

Well, that's just great! Also, even though that was a horrible way to die, I am truly grateful that Merton has finally bit the dust. Keep up the great work!

Legolas is going to take the arrow for Aragorn, isn't he? Keep up the great work!

Well, I for one can't wait until Legolas and Tervanis meet again. Keep up the great work!