Reviews for The Twist of Fate |
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PrinceOfShadows1 chapter 23 . 1/25/2018 I’ve been waiting for an update! Naruto is definitely traumatized by his uncles death which makes him weak. Obito needs to train him on that before it gets them both killed. |
Guest chapter 23 . 1/25/2018 You know, normally I'm not one to root for the bad guys. But GODDAMN if your not making it hard for me to want Naruto to succeed with the Moon's Eye Plan. I really love the direction you're going with this story, good luck to both you and Kao with writing this great fic. I can't wait for more! |
PhAnToM 1212 chapter 23 . 1/25/2018 I really love this fantastic story, so keep up the good work! |
Shadowmaster91 chapter 23 . 1/25/2018 Meanwhile I love your story, I still feel wary of the plot. I hate evil Narutos. And despite him not being evil right now, how much time will pass until he becomes some missguided as-shole. |
KHARAKI TAKAN chapter 23 . 1/25/2018 Let us hope the next chapter is a time-skip as it has become incredibly boring to always read a scared Naruto, you need to develop his character more pretty much every character he has always been scared. Nice little fight though. |
Guest chapter 23 . 1/25/2018 Thank you for updating. |
NotAnActiveAccountAnymore69 chapter 23 . 1/24/2018 THANKS KAO!~ |
PinkiePieParty122894 chapter 23 . 1/24/2018 I love the new chapter! |
ParisLol1 chapter 23 . 1/24/2018 THANK YOU KAO AND THANK YOU AUTHOR |
Tom2011 chapter 23 . 1/24/2018 Nice to see update. Give my thanks to your daughter. Sometimes we all need little push from someone. |
skk3 chapter 1 . 1/18/2018 great chapter, love the progression of the story |
amanda.mars.42 chapter 22 . 12/6/2017 Oh my please continue! Im in love! |
Guest chapter 22 . 10/29/2017 Amazing story. Glad to see that it wasn’t abandoned. One small suggestion. Your pacing, while good, is considerably slower than before (for obvious reasons as you explained). For that reason, maybe you should consider having longer chapters (7,000-15,000 words). Of course, longer chapters would mean more time spent writing and editing, so your pacing would remain slow, but... it would make updates far more rewarding. Just a thought. As author, in the end it’s all up to you. |
D3athToLif3 chapter 22 . 10/26/2017 Good Sir/Madam... FINISH YOUR DIDDILY DAMN STORIES! Second dreams needs to continue because i feel its at a great point in its story. And the twist of fate is very good as well. I see far too many unfinished Obito stories on . Please go back to finish those stories. Even if it may be 2-3 more chapters for Second Dreams. Second dreams is the better version of one of your older stories which is discontinued. I understand if you're busy with your life and family, but getting on to help those who looked to your stories and enjoyed it should be (somewhat) a priority. So please. Give us our endings. Not only for our satisfaction, but for yours as well. |
xz.sayayin chapter 22 . 9/30/2017 mas capitulo porfa plis |