Reviews for The Twist of Fate |
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JuniorTheBeast chapter 20 . 12/28/2016 I've been waiting so long nice chapter really starting to see this working out between obito and naruto |
narutoDkurosaki chapter 20 . 12/28/2016 I don't even remember what happened in the previous chapters. A same summary would've been better. |
NatNicole chapter 1 . 12/17/2016 AMAZINGly written! Oh, the feels... Also, it's very realistic & everyone's In-Character. *snarling in fury, attempts to maim Namikaze* I'm confused; I thought Obito & Tobi are the same person? Or are they canonically the same guy, but two different people in this story? |
DarkSouls246 chapter 19 . 10/18/2016 Well I just so happened to be looking through all of my favorited stories and came across this one again. I decided to read it again because there really aren't enough good fanfictions involving Obito out there and well this did use to be one of my all time favorite stories on this site so why not. After going through this story again I've got to say it really does sadden me that it hasn't been updated in quite a while and not just this one I mean all of your stories. They were all just so good and you managed to capture the essence of Obito's character so well that I couldn't help but root for him to succeed and get the happiness he deserved. I'd love if you came back to these stories, but if you no longer have the time or energy to finish them then that's alright too. I guess what I'm trying to say is I loved this story and all your others and I'd love for them to be continued but I don't expect nor need them too be and that's alright. Anyway I'd say that's enough rambling on my part good luck with any future plans you may or may not have. |
pinkdoughnuts chapter 19 . 9/21/2016 Do it Obito. For Naruto. Give him the perfect world. Just make sure Naruto is safe. I'm really into this, Tobi when he died was heartbreaking but then Obito protected Naruto even though he doesn't like him, he cares for Naruto. Poor Kushina, we should remember that against her will her child was taken from her and she couldn't stop it since she was dying. |
Guest chapter 19 . 9/7/2016 wont take over a month they say, years later no update you do |
bartlettpear chapter 19 . 9/2/2016 A new family is building around Naruto, he has White Zetsu, Kinase and Obito as he gradually gets turned around. I enjoy your writing, it is easy to follow and I don't mind the slow pace. Thank you for writing. |
bartlettpear chapter 16 . 9/2/2016 Out of those four, I'm going to pick feeling sorry for Naruto, I think he's strong and I want him being to change his world, if his dream is to be with Tobi and Obito can make it happen then so be it. |
bartlettpear chapter 15 . 9/2/2016 I'm probably bias because I don't know him well but I still don't like Minato. If he wasn't Hokage, he wouldn't have had to make that choice but each person's world mainly consists of the closest people around then... it seems worse to be a bad father than a bad king because at least you can step down from being a king and someone better could take your place, but then I'm selfish :-b Naruto losing Tobi and Kakashi being mauled by Minato made me sad. I really liked Tobi and the White Zetsu that took care of Naruto. Naruto's reasoning with Tobi and running away, I wanted them to do that but I guess there was no way to do that and take Obito with them at the same time was there? |
Rubia97 chapter 19 . 8/30/2016 this made me hold back tears, y'know? This is amazing. Keep up the good work |
1freakshow chapter 19 . 8/20/2016 Please update again soon. Goodluck on editing |
MeMe85 chapter 19 . 7/31/2016 Im saving this page 4 the next chapter |
AraelDranoth chapter 19 . 7/21/2016 I can't wait for the next update! I really think he's taking the first steps to being a real father to Naruto. |
AraelDranoth chapter 18 . 7/21/2016 Bad Zetsu! |
AraelDranoth chapter 15 . 7/21/2016 Man am I glad you didn't kill Kakashi. He's too awesome to die! |