|Reviews for Reasons For Survival|
| Lilian chapter 5 . 8/28/2015
I'm too lazy to sign in, oh well. Just wanted to tell you, as a die-hard Trekkie and TOS enthusiast, I think you're doing a very good job with this. Especially since you're fairly new to the fandom.
I like how you expand Khan's character. Even though I will always prefer the original, Cumberbatch's version of the character intrigued me. They kind of ended up making the new Khan more sympathetic than the first one! (Maybe it's just the sadistic nature of writers, but I am enjoying his suffering, keep it up :P)
My only problem with this I really shouldn't be complaining about, as you ARE drawing from the new movies, and that's how they more or less portray the character. Karl Urban nailed the cynical, moody side of McCoy, but unfortunately the movie's script left out his warmer side (plus all the friendships haven't had a chance to develop yet). Maybe you could tone him down a bit? Oh well. It's not really essential to your plot, so you don't have to listen to my TOS versus JJ-universe rants... :P
I really, really enjoyed this nonetheless, and I eagerly await the next installment. (Also, don't sweat trying to be a regular updater. I can be patient and I am well aware of how school and general life can mess with one's brain!)
Keep it up ;)
| Doyle0915 chapter 5 . 7/23/2015
Oh please update soon.
Its getting very good.
You know when I saw Into Darkness, I didn't trust Marcus the second I saw him. He just gave me the "I'm up to no good" vibe.
| The Tezzerax chapter 5 . 7/1/2015
| zeynel chapter 5 . 6/14/2015
I love this new part! Hope we will see another one soon! Weakened Khan and exhausted Kirk, both forced to change their views on the other due to the circonstances they're stranded on... I love it!
| thelastwhitelion chapter 5 . 6/12/2015
Aww yisss new chapter!
| SkyWolf25 chapter 5 . 6/2/2015
HEY, you're back! :D
I'm really sorry I haven't been able to reply to the pm properly, school is adding more pressure than ever and I thought it needed a good reply with a lot of thought put into it, which at the current time I can't do. :(
Er but I think you may have mixed up the chapters? This one is identical to the previous chapter..
| Guest chapter 5 . 6/2/2015
I look forward to every chapter of this fan-fiction! I have to tell you, I get a thrill out of reading superbly written prose, therefore I find reading this to be extremely entertaining! Bravo! :D.
| Nimitsu chapter 4 . 8/3/2014
In trueth, this is, though clearly an agonizing situation for Jim and Khan, quite interesting for us.
However, if I were there, I would be wrapping them in nice, soft blankets and clutching them to me, crying about how Sissy will make it all okay.
Keep on the awesomeness! *Thumbs-up*
| XJackiefrostX chapter 4 . 7/30/2014
Thank you for not abandoning this. I kniw how hard it can be with updating, my stories haven't been updated in a long time. This chapter was magnificent.
| zeynel chapter 4 . 7/27/2014
Love this new part!
| Smile or else chapter 4 . 7/27/2014
Update soon, please!
| Yobrodachiousflo chapter 4 . 7/27/2014
| SkyWolf25 chapter 4 . 7/27/2014
OH MY GOD IS THIS THE REAL LIFE, OR IS IT JUST FANTASY
NO THIS REAL
THIS IS NOT A DRILL
I REPEAT THIS IS NOT A DRILL
I can't believe this, I'm so happy and grinning right now, I actually said f*** yeah out loud when I got the alerts ahhhhhh
Your work is wonderful as always and I love it! I printed the past 3 chapters out to read offline(30 pages!) today and was feelling strangely proud about it then I got a new chapter and I have to wait another week to print that out too xDD But who cares about that, so glad you're back :D Are you all right now?
Now, let's actually talk about the chapter, the original purpose of a review xP Khan showing weakness and still refusing to get help was well shown, he's such a stubborn kid! Yeah, does he know that all that 'stay way I duntneed help' thing makes like a stubbirn kid? xD Jim's reaction was so Jim-like too, all that shouting and frustration. I feel you on this one, Jim. If the situation hadn't been dire they would have been pretty adorable pulling tantrums at each other. Ah, children. xD
Whoop whoop again for the update, and thank you for the cute Khan drawing you sent me, I replied to that too if you haven't seen it already!
(and I somehow pulled a certain rhapsody reference xD Did you ? ;) )
| Moo-cow300 chapter 1 . 6/20/2014
For some reason, Khan's "I beg your pardon?" amused me overly much. Wondering if it's just me...
| Thelastwhitelion chapter 1 . 4/8/2014
65% is good enough for me! I'm actually really exited for your update.