Reviews for Mature Bud
Usagi no Megume chapter 13 . 8/24
Mano que história lixo sem brincadeira eu estava gosto da história ate você começar a corta a história eu não intendi nada como a sakura morreu ou como a naruka foi salva
Reality check chapter 13 . 5/23
I like your story is a good alternate universe story very well written I just wish it wasn't so much swearing in it but it's not bad again it has great potential and look forward to being more thanks again by the way how long do you plan on making this I'm just curious
Guest chapter 2 . 4/21
hello i am really thank you for the story.
Tsukoblue chapter 13 . 3/14
When will this story get an update?
Siege314 chapter 1 . 1/3
If you clean up the language a bit and pace yourself... THIS STORY WOULD BE THE FUCKIGN BEST! I was literally laughing reading his the whole time.

Redo the first part: Naruto turns to see Sakura in the window "Hey Sakura!" He spoke "I think I'll just sleep with your mom, k."

Jk but seriously, don't be crass about your lemon scenes.
Reaper4991 chapter 11 . 11/28/2015
You know, for a lemony fic, you are skimping on the lemons. Also the name doesn't apply as well with your plot anymore
Lm chapter 3 . 11/19/2015
This is good story i just wondering go back rewright this make not so smut more romantic and keep lemon don't get me wrong any wright smut. But i did just ask you nicely go make less smut but if not just ask hope ok sorry if offered you happy thanksgiving
Tsukoblue chapter 3 . 5/22/2015
When will the next chapter be out?
This is a great story, please don't let it fade away
BartWLewis chapter 13 . 4/30/2015
Awesome. Can't wait for more.
DarkBlur2005 chapter 4 . 3/26/2015
Dude sasuke killed itachi before the invasion of pain.
Prince0Dragon chapter 13 . 3/9/2015
I wanba see a honeymoon!
narmulti chapter 13 . 2/22/2015
Good story keep it up and UPDATE SOON
Lenny mosca chapter 3 . 1/31/2015
its not a bad story. can I ask why you want to use a lemon for the story don't get me wrong it was unique I would say could you wight another version of this but with less nudity&sex more fluff but the story was good and very unique so I no problem with it I just wish it was less fortuitous sex so just so you know I'm a flaming you or anything whatever the hell that word means I would appreciate it but if not thank you for Reading this review
Demon's Poet chapter 1 . 1/10/2015
...Just...DAMN...If I walked in on something like that, I'd probably faint...
SaucyHandles chapter 8 . 12/12/2014
Fuckkkkk, hit the post button instead of clicking the fucking text box, so there's my fail of the day.

As I was saying, I apologize for the rude review, because you no doubt don't appreciate my flame.
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