Reviews for Mature Bud
Dragoncyber22 chapter 13 . 3/31
A good story, and it has a very good plot. If you make a continuation or continue
the same story will be very cool and that the continuation is very makes you a great fanfic writer, and please continue the story.
my 2 guys chapter 13 . 1/22
that was good keep the chapters coming
Guest chapter 1 . 12/20/2016
I've seen enough hentai to know where this is going
dyew14 chapter 13 . 11/13/2016
Really good
FuZzvKiNgZz chapter 4 . 10/11/2016
Yeah, Through.
my 2 guys chapter 13 . 8/29/2016
that was great
Usagi no Megume chapter 13 . 8/24/2016
Mano que história lixo sem brincadeira eu estava gosto da história ate você começar a corta a história eu não intendi nada como a sakura morreu ou como a naruka foi salva
Reality check chapter 13 . 5/23/2016
I like your story is a good alternate universe story very well written I just wish it wasn't so much swearing in it but it's not bad again it has great potential and look forward to being more thanks again by the way how long do you plan on making this I'm just curious
Guest chapter 2 . 4/21/2016
hello i am really thank you for the story.
Tsukoblue chapter 13 . 3/14/2016
When will this story get an update?
MeiYamato chapter 1 . 1/3/2016
If you clean up the language a bit and pace yourself... THIS STORY WOULD BE THE FUCKIGN BEST! I was literally laughing reading his the whole time.

Redo the first part: Naruto turns to see Sakura in the window "Hey Sakura!" He spoke "I think I'll just sleep with your mom, k."

Jk but seriously, don't be crass about your lemon scenes.
Reaper4991 chapter 11 . 11/28/2015
You know, for a lemony fic, you are skimping on the lemons. Also the name doesn't apply as well with your plot anymore
Lm chapter 3 . 11/19/2015
This is good story i just wondering go back rewright this make not so smut more romantic and keep lemon don't get me wrong any wright smut. But i did just ask you nicely go make less smut but if not just ask hope ok sorry if offered you happy thanksgiving
Tsukoblue chapter 3 . 5/22/2015
When will the next chapter be out?
This is a great story, please don't let it fade away
Lewis-Sama chapter 13 . 4/30/2015
Awesome. Can't wait for more.
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